Espeon
26 comments
Dinobrx[OP]
18.10.2018 19:34
Linksorry some lines are kinda messed up
EpicBanana
18.10.2018 19:35
Linki think its good
is it ok if i give some critique on this drawing?just wanna know first because there are a few strange things about this drawing
its just the head is very,rectangle like in a way? like,it has no neck,and the hair starts before it reaches the part where it should normaly start.the hair and the creature on the cloud on top looks pretty weird.the stomach is really high up and the belly button is where her chest is.thats all i wanted to say i know i suck at anattomy
yeah i see,dont worry i was where you are at some point to. dont worry youll get better,theres always more room for improvement.just to make you feel better look at my first anim it ****ing sucks
Constructive criticism:
The colors are eyebleeding, Mabe make some colors like the hair lighter, or a bit more pastel. The hair is a shaggy mess that only covers the top of her head, so it looks like her forehead is huge. The head is very distorted and it kinda looks like a blob of peach colored jello. The neck is supposed to start out smaller at the top and expand outwards as it goes down, not be thick at the top and thinner at the bottom. The arms are ok. But Mabe practice the torso, because she looks fat. The nose hole isn’t nesicarry for this art, because it just makes it look a bit distorted. The mouth is too low compared to the eyes, and the eyes needs some work.
As for the espoeon, their hind legs are squashed and tiny compaired to the front legs. The torso is fine besides that it becomes far too thin on the top, wich that makes the legs and tail look weird. The head is strange and mishspened like the head of the girl. And the front paws look like they’re strieght lines or stiff.
For the front legs of the espeon you could have shaped the paws rather than having a stub at the end. Also, the backround hurts my eyes.
So work on that stuff if you like. and don’t say “it’s because I’m a kid” because everbody on flipanim is a kid, and that’s no ecsuse for having flawed art. I’m a kid, spaceguts is a kid, IAAB is a kid, nighteye is a kid, everyone here is a kid.