-ik this is practice and it looks good already -the mouth doesn't really line up w the rest of the face, if you do the thing with circles and lines and anatomy idk proportions should improve if you practice -don't forget to draw shoulders riP -the hair could have better texture n stuff with like detail? O also its a bit too big for the head? Idk how to explain but relative to the face you drew ?? Idk I'm not good at this And hush I still have a lot to improve too,, my art used to be so bad and I'm still learning ;v;