Mortis
9 comments
AAronHObbs
16.11.2019 02:21
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i saw your post earlier about art critique so here it goes.
I like the overall pose, even though we can't see the legs i think it is fluid.
The face matches perfectly with the hair and kind of looks like a hat rather than hair, a way to fix this is to draw the hair onto the head during the sketch.
the coloring is good, although the light source does not match with the shading. keep the shading facing the opposite direction.
The face seems flat as well, im not sure on how you could fix this, it just seems off.
Once again, the coloring is great. pose is great. Although the background is simple, it fits the character. if i were to give out scores i would say it is a 5/10. this is just my personal opinion, you may feel differently and that is perfectly fine. I hope you enjoyed my critique, and i hope it improves your artwork for the better!