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16.11.2019
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16.11.2019 02:21
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16.11.2019 05:54
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THATS SO COOL
16.11.2019 06:47
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Thanks!
22.11.2019 18:24
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i saw your post earlier about art critique so here it goes. I like the overall pose, even though we can't see the legs i think it is fluid. The face matches perfectly with the hair and kind of looks like a hat rather than hair, a way to fix this is to draw the hair onto the head during the sketch. the coloring is good, although the light source does not match with the shading. keep the shading facing the opposite direction. The face seems flat as well, im not sure on how you could fix this, it just seems off. Once again, the coloring is great. pose is great. Although the background is simple, it fits the character. if i were to give out scores i would say it is a 5/10. this is just my personal opinion, you may feel differently and that is perfectly fine. I hope you enjoyed my critique, and i hope it improves your artwork for the better!
22.11.2019 18:27
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Oh, thank you! But what do you mean by hat?
22.11.2019 18:29
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by hat i meant it looked as if he was bald, and there was a hat cupping around his head. i hope this helps.
22.11.2019 18:30
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Ohhh, I see But he does have short hair in the back. I’m not sure how to fix shorter hair
22.11.2019 18:34
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i see, that makes more sense now. The way i do it is i make the patch of hair that is shorter, darker, like the underside of the hair. I may also use thin lines streaking across the shorter hair to convey that it is shorter.
22.11.2019 18:36
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I’ve done the thin lines before, didn’t look nice! But maybe making it darker would work
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