remake my oc?

You are the oceans grey waves Destined to seek life beyond the shore just out of reach Yet the waters ever change Flowing like time the path is yours to climb In the white light A hand reaches though A double edged blade cuts your heart in two Waking dreams fade away Embrace the brand new day Sing with me a song Of birthrights and love,, The light scatters to the sky above Dawn breaks through the gloom White as a bone Lost in thoughts all alone Life is not just filled with happiness or sorrow Even the thorn in your heart In time it may become A rose Sing with me a song of silence and blood The rain falls but can’t wash away the mud Within my ancient heart dwells Madness and pride can no one hear my cry You are the oceans grey waves Destined to seek life beyond the shore just out of reach Yet the waters ever change Flowing like time the path is yours to climb You are the oceans grey waves.... (Don’t mind me singing)