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09.02.2018
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09.02.2018 23:31
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What you dont like about my draw?Plz say true!
09.02.2018 23:36
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the colors are great, it looks adorable. whats there not to love?
09.02.2018 23:37
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Thanks :3
09.02.2018 23:38
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although the part at the top that you forgot to fill in kinda bothers me
09.02.2018 23:40
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Ohh yes,i was so exited to upload this hehe
09.02.2018 23:43
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lol XD
09.02.2018 23:47
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The outlines are kinda sloppy, you can see the paint roller over them Andy they’re going over each other. This can easily be fixed by just spending a bit more time and keeping a separate frame for the lineart (middle button at the top copies frames, use copy and aste in the year to put it back when you’re done coloring and shading). The arms are fairly short, the tips of your hands reach halfway between your hips and your knees. The rest of the body also really isn’t proportionate to the head, a smaller head would make more sense. I do like the color scheme, it harmonizes all of them around each other and they work well together. The last thing I’ll mention is that I have no idea what’s up with that hood. The hair is behind it or something? And the shape is a bit awkward. But yeah :P that’s all I have to say
09.02.2018 23:57
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Thank you so much!It was a quickly draw but im going to take my time to make it right :) And so,the head is bigger than the body because my artsyle is like chibi)? but thanks for your opinion
10.02.2018 01:29
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You should probably draw a nose, and not have an eyelash over the hair. Also, since SmilingNyan pointed it out earlier and I was too unintelligent to see it, don’t have hair behind a hood.
12.02.2018 00:09
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