Constructive critic!

10 comments
ArmyXever[OP]
09.02.2018 23:31
LinkWhat you dont like about my draw?Plz say true!
The outlines are kinda sloppy, you can see the paint roller over them Andy they’re going over each other. This can easily be fixed by just spending a bit more time and keeping a separate frame for the lineart (middle button at the top copies frames, use copy and aste in the year to put it back when you’re done coloring and shading). The arms are fairly short, the tips of your hands reach halfway between your hips and your knees. The rest of the body also really isn’t proportionate to the head, a smaller head would make more sense. I do like the color scheme, it harmonizes all of them around each other and they work well together. The last thing I’ll mention is that I have no idea what’s up with that hood. The hair is behind it or something? And the shape is a bit awkward.
But yeah :P that’s all I have to say