Gold’s Outburst (Short story)
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MEMEFRUIT[OP]
13.02.2020 22:35
LinkHis footsteps echoed the hall. He entered the small enclosed chamber that was closed off to everybody holding somebody special. He peeked through the bars of the small cramped dirty cell where a small yellow alien paced around in circles. His eyes were dull and green, his fur ragged and dirty, small cuts and bruises were visable.. small deep cuts around his arms and "neck" from the times he cut and tried to bleed out to death. He noticed the large figure and growled, his pacing stopped as he crouched defensivly. The figure entered the cell, standing in front of the door so he couldn't escape. "Hello little monster." Said the figure in the emotionless creepy voice as he smiled. "What do you want you evil bastard..." Gold growled as he narrowed his eyes. "I just want to talk. I just want to know how you feel." He stated simply. Gold's eyes widened as he began to laugh manically, "OH YOU WANNA KNOW HOW I FEEL?!" Gold raised a fist but immediately got shocked by the shock collar. "Not physically no.." Dr.Hoon
MEMEFRUIT[OP]
13.02.2020 22:35
Linkslowly said, staring at Gold. Gold growled as he got up from his spasm, "Well... first off you've provided me nothing here. No food, No water, No comfort besides the occasional vist from Becky and this cell is dirty! And did i mention that I haven't eaten or even smelled a dorito in almost a year!" He growled as he brought up his beloved cheesy snack. "You don't deserve that. If i want you to be the ultimate war machine i need you to get used to harsh treatment like this." Dr.Hoon responded his swirly eyes now slits. Gold slowly began to sob as green goop escaped his eyes, "It hurts.. i can't do this anymore... Just kill me... KILL ME PLEASE!" He begged and cried, pleading on his knees. Dr.Hoon smiled and began to walk out. Suddenly from behind he heard cracking and goopy noises and turned around quickly, seeing Gol slowly transform. He distorted a yell from the pain, "KILL ME." And roared loudly in half finished monster form. He lunged for the doctor as he yelped, dodging quickly ad locking the cell.
MEMEFRUIT[OP]
13.02.2020 22:36
LinkGold banged against the walls and screamed and roared. Dr.Hoon sighed as he walked out of the enclosed room, pinching his forehead from his small annoyed headache. Why did he do this, all he wanted to do was impress his family but look where that got him. He chuckled quietly as a tear escaped his left eye. He wiped it away quickly and looked up, his eyes growing brighter then ever as he smiled again like that hadn't happened and continued to walk away.
MEMEFRUIT[OP]
13.02.2020 22:37
Link(Sorry for the lazy drawing I really was just excited to post this story lmao. Hope you guys enjoy!)
MelonFox
13.02.2020 22:51
LinkDon't worry, you got good story telling skills to make up for it.
