就这样吧.
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this took forever,,,
fan art of three people
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Wolfy526
27.10.2020 00:29
LinkIdk, I'm trying too
I LOVE WritinG sTORIES FJKSLDJFJSDL
ok tip 1.
if your doing something, dont make it obvious, also, describe well so the reader can see the place in their head.
that sounds confusing.
Example: You want to surprise the reader by making a monster apear out of nowhere.
BAD: "I walked around, in the cold mONstEr infested building. Then I heard monster footsteps, looked behind me, and screamed."
GOOD: "I walked around the eerie building, scattered boxes on the floor and bloodstains on the walls. It was quiet. Suddenly, I heard footsteps. I flashed my eyes behind me and there it was. A big green monster with horns and sharp teeth. I screamed, Frightened."
tip 2.
make it have suspence/interesting.
BAD: "With a shotgun in my hand I came across the king monster. I shot it, and it died easily."
GOOD: "I held my shotgun, and walked across the bloody building desperate to find my way out. Then, a huge monster leaped in front of me..."
(INCLUDE DIALOGE!)
"'Grrrrrr...' The king monster growled low.
I held up my shotgun, shivvering.
(onamonapea!)
'BANG!' The monster laughed at this.
(1 epic fight scene later, im not gonna write the entire thing.)
I came out of the building, right as it collapsed. And I held the king monsters head up high for all to see."