attach an anim plz

ok, well first I have a question why are the lines yellow? and do you use a base? if not then u should start to use one. look at refs and you can even use human ref. step out of ur comfort zone ok. also it could use some shading, overall this is not that bad so I give it a 5/10

oh, well the yellow looks kinda odd, oh and I forgot to add use more shading

It needs shading. but that's all it needs so 7/10

ok, this is similar to @Unkown-Elf's style. try using bases the drawing will look better. try using black lines bc I could nearly tell the bg and person apart, also don't make the lines thicker lo make like a wink, use thin black lines. so overall this is not that bad so it gets a 4/10

*bearly

better shading, line art for everything pupils, where is the other eyebrow? and fix the eyelashes. use a base they will make ur drawings much better. and give the person real hands, not stubs. you will never get better if you don't get out of ur comfort zone and learn the things you don't know how to do

and I rate it 5/10

these are very good, but I have to ask... do you hand color? try using thin lines especially for the first drawing. the first one is not that bad so I give it an 8/10.

oh hand coloring is when you don't use the paint bucket

The second one is good too. I like that you gave me a sketch this time. this is really good for a sketch, so I have no complaints, so a 10/10

well usually I look at yt vids on that kind of stuff. I really love ur art btw

np

um... use a base, ref, shading, beta editor, art classes, and a background to make the colors pop. this is ok so I give it a 2/10

wow, this is ok. add more shading, and add less shading at the hair. use bases, refs, and step out of ur comfort zone. and what is that little brown thing floating in the air? overall this is ok, so it gets a 5/10

Oh, this is not that bad, but It needs shading, like a lot of shading. And the coloring is really odd, and why did you use so much white for shiny shading. overall this is all right. So I rate it a 6/10

ok, well the shading is not bad, I really don't have any complaints, so overall this is pretty good. so I rate it a 9/10