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14.02.2022 22:16
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He slayed his parents for the throne, Which everyone in the Kingdom was aware of but the system was flawed so they had no power to do anything about it whatsoever.) - (He then realized how much the people were careful ( as in caring) for him..) - Short entail for the “ other kingdom “ that’s heading up: This kingdom was strong, but intimidated by king beau, due to titlement. They heard of Beau's past and looked at him as a monster. They wanted to get rid of him. His "allies'' hated him, (especially a knight named Apollo) so the people he ruled over went behind his back and formed an alliance with another kingdom. Even his guards hated him, but masked their feelings under fake smiles.) - (After going behind king beau’s back, the people he ruled signed a treaty to join sides to defeat the king( king beau) with another kingdom ( apollo played a big role in this)- ( he played a big role in defeating king beau.). - In between the Walls and the fields -( Alba had to slay the king.
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To prove his loyalty) - keep in mind alba's first time killing somebody) so alba's face was drenched in tears) And that's the end of the arc. Side note: this wont be as long at king beau’s arc.( neo’s arc) may not even happen. Which leads into neo’s arc. They realize they need a new leader, a new responsible willing one perhaps. And that's where neo comes in. But we'll talk about that in a minute. After the ruler beau was slayed Alba left the kingdom to start a new journey w/ friends) back to neo’s arc. Neo, a foreigner from a land far away. He was responsible in the people a.k.a dogs eyes but him being a foreigner left him questionable. But the people were desperate. nonetheless, they took a vote. Between neo and apollo og
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neo won the election by 5 votes. Making the other 96% of the kingdom not qualified to neo. They didn't follow his rules and they realized the only power Neo had was the title "king" that's where topa comes in. A dog put among the the title" unworthy. It's almost as if neo and topa were in the same boat.) -but, topa successfully persuaded the people to stay under neo’s leadership. Topa stopped the people from overthrowing Neo once again. Topa knew they couldn't have another reign of beau.- ( Oh by the way; I know it became more like a president's body but there's a difference. The reason they had to vote for a new king is because the old king, king beau killed his parents for the title king. King Beau didn't have anyone blood related. And the kingdom new that nobody would want a kingdom with a bad title.-
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( The reign of bazin) Bazin the country once under the paws of king beau fell. But it didn't fall to king Beau, it fell to a new leader. King neo. King neo was following in former king, Beau's steps. King beau would lay in the bed all day and overthink. because the people still gave him shade. They still hated him. They still despised him. So after that they came to the agreement that it would be more beneficial if they made it fully a presidential body and topa helped get neo Back on his paws. While they were on their journey to a small store that sold stuff prior to them leaving on their journey they bumped into Alba and his friends. Topa recognized alba's face from when he slayed king beau. But topa didn't say anything to cover the fact he wasn't supposed to be in the kingdom at that time. Alba asked if they wanted to follow him and his friends to a certain destination to where topa disagreed but when Alba offered to buy their stuff to when neo agreed. On their journey they bumped into Lucy.
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Some information on lucky - male -short -untrust worthy - hates people who make mistakes, "YES MY NAME IS LUCY". He then kept on walking, he could see alba and topa looking at each other he then scotched and went on his way with head down, " DAMMIT"! He said attempting to kick a rock with his front paw, but landing on the open lanes leaving his back ground up and all fours up. He started mumbling underneath his breath to himself which you hear " suntanning in the cold?" Lucy then turned his head and rolled his eyes. " Did you beat them up a little?" The bigger dog asked with a smirk" No I'm out of it" Lucy replied. The large dog, known as Arsen. ( Greek for strong) Arsen: A large dog with a brownish-red color pallet and scar cover his eyes with tiny bite marks around his white colored muzzle.
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"Arsen then looked up and said "c'mon let's head" back, leaving Lucky irritated and annoyed. " Sure '' lucky mumbled to himself making it -loud enough for Arsen to hear. ","But let's take the short way" Lucy grinned looking up at Arsen. Arsen grinned back ( cut back to topa,neo,alba and friends ( Nov, 15 2021) Alba looked at topa suggestively " Y'KnOW we cOulddd work together" alba suggested with a grin. Topa looking "annoyed on what". " Uhm, me bazil and fiffy need a little help" topas head then panned to fiffy and bazil chatting then back to topa. " On what"?.. topa asked uninterested. " Well, we needed to go looking for rhinestones''. " There's slimelines down there and they pay a good 100 troits for them" alba looking at topa with a grin. Topa looked at neo. Neo being neo shook his head up and down repeatedly with a quirky smile. with as big of a smile alba had. " FINE "...." We could use some help…" Topa replied. Alba then ran back to tell fiffy and bazil the news. " I sense something
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We could use some help…" Topa replied. Alba then ran back to tell fiffy and bazil the news. " I sense something, " topa said to neo. Neo then replied " yeah, were going slime minning"! Topa thought in his head * that's not what I'm talking about, idiot*.
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( Mon, feb 14) Topa sighed. The group then proceeded to walk to the slime lines. Alba trotting. Neo walking. And Topa walking. “ Do you have any currency?” Alba asked topa. “ I’m surprised you know what that is.” Topa replied. “ But now that you mention it all I have is some empty jewelry from the kingdom.” Alba then tilted his head” Alba then stopped walking and paused for a moment then shaking his head. He looked at topa and neo “ I-Is.. That's where you guys came from.” Alba asked. Topa looked at Alba. “ I’m sorry you had to do that.” Topa said. Alba then looked at his paws while proceeding to start walking. Neo looked stunned as well. But he started to grin sadly. Eventually the group made it to the mines. “ Here we are.” Neo said. He still looked shocked from the previous conversation but still trying to look happy. Alba then carried the conversation “ Let’s see if we can sell our jewelry” Alba then slowly walked to the counter and put his paws up.
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“ Do you think we could maybe…Sell jewelry here?” “ Non!”. “ commerce uniquement ( trading only!)” Well, do you think you could offer for the jewelry?” Pas trop ( no too much)” The seller then cleared his throat. “ Go, But give us half of what you harvest” Alba tilted his head and nonned with a smile. He jumped down and approached topa and neo. “ What did they say?” Neo asked. He said something about us having to give half of what we harvest.” Alba said. “ Sounds fair enough, “ Neo replied. “ Well, let's be on our way.” Topa said doubtfully. Inside the mines there were green glowing reflective lights in a dim cave. “ Amazing!” Neo and Alba said. Topa looked around with a wide smile. ( Flashback to neo being a pup and looking
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Sell jewelry here?” “ Non!”. “ commerce uniquement ( trading only!)” Well, do you think you could offer for the jewelry?” Pas trop ( no too much)” The seller then cleared his throat. “ Go, But give us half of what you harvest” Alba tilted his head and nonned with a smile. He jumped down and approached topa and neo. “ What did he say?” Alba asked. He said something about us having to give half of what we harvest.” Alba said. “ How do you even know french?” Neo looked shocked and confused, He was cut off.“ Sounds fair enough, “alba replied. “ Well, let's be on our way.” Topa said doubtfully. Inside the mines there were green glowing reflective lights in a dim cave. “
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Amazing!” Neo and Alba said. Topa looked around with a wide smile. ( Flashback to topa being a pup and looking around. )“ TOPA!” Neo and alba yelled ( flashback ends) Show topa about to be attacked by a slime but then suddenly pushed. “ The dog that attacked the slime then landed and looked at the group. “Oui je m'appelle Archer!" “We don't speak French,” Neo replied. “ ohh that's fine! I can speak English as well! My friends call me archer. Archer said. “Very creative,” Alba said with a genuine smile. “ creative” Topa said. “ thanks for saving my friend “ neo said. “ that's what i do around here!” archer than scanned the group. He looked at alba `` heyyyy your… that dog” archer said unsurely “ what dog” alba asked unsuspiciously “ your dog that slaye-” He noticed alba's smile fading. ( a long moment of silence) “ from what I heard you're a pretty good archer” Archer said looking at alba. ( alba shook his head up and down) “ I guess..” alba said. “ y’know i'm the best archer to be'' (alba then brightene
20.04.2022 21:18
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the archer asked. “ Bounty? What bounty” Neo asked greedly. “ Well, haven't you heard? There's a bounty for the slime queen. My friends and I are going to slay her for the reward”! Archer said in accomplishment. “ So you come here everyday to look for her,” Archer laughed. “ We live down here in a bunker. Do you guys want to come and stay the night” “ it is getting dark out” neo said “ sure!” Alba said. Topa didn't like this idea but just went along with it) “Well c’mon!” Archer said. Neo slowed down so he could talk to topa. “ sooo” Neo asked“ So…what?” topa asked “ well… you haven't said anything yet” “ you dont think it’s sketchy his name is literally his hobby” topa asked paranoid . neo chuckled. “ Welp this is it!” ( a small rocky hole only big enough for them to fit through) ( they all squeezed through the hole, to which they saw a dog with pink fur and a light blonde undertone with orange numbs) “ hi guys!” “ meeeet Poky!’ Archer said (Poky scoffed) “ listen you guys better not steal my reward. She
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She exclaimed angrily) “ she kinda looks like you” Neo said to topa. Topa only glanced at neo. “ Archer, it's your turn to cook, '' she said. “ yeh yeh I know “ he said. “ make yourselves comfortable, alba you can watch me do archering if you’d like, and you guys-ca-wait what are your guys names?” archer asked. “ I’m Neo and this is my best friend, topa!” “ oh, well you two can make yourselves at home, speaking of home where did you guys come from” “ I came from a small town named dactyl ( dac-tee-ly), I would love to help my dad fish!” “ Cool! What about you Topa?” ( topa became quiet and his eyes widened) “ it's ok if you don't want to talk about, you alba?” “ I was born in the Kingdom’s village,” alba replied. “ ohh, well..There's a back guest room, you guys can stay there for the time being,” “ok, see you later!” Alba said to poky and Archer. ( As they were walking down the hallway they saw a hall filled with rare slimes.” “ Woah, Cool!” Alba said. “ y’know i'm like him but 10x cooler!” said neo.
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Topa be taller than him but was blacked out* “ I wanna go, I wanna join you!” Young Topa said. *flashbacks ends* “ alba! I’m done with dinner!” Would you like to eat first or join me?” Archer asked. “O-oh I'm full, I already ate! Can I watch now?” “ Of course young lad! You will finally learn how to be a warrior like me ``''coooool” alba said “ Great, follow me!” Archer said. Poky served Neo and topa the plate. “ So tell me, why’d you guys really come here?” “ oh well when we left the kingdom we kinda needed money and we ran into acher!” “ hmhmm” “ Listen tell me whatever you guys want, but I stopped trusting dogs like you” “ Dogs like us?” “ y’know the dogs that act innocent and like they need something, just to steal all our prized possessions” “ woahh someone did that to you guys?” neo asked. “ Was it a small white dog with black spots?” topa asked
20.04.2022 21:21
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“ I don't remember'' poky said * neo pulled alba over* “ Hey! You can't just accuse everyone you see of being a bad guy!” neo said. Topa only stared at Neo blankly. “ Hey, I can still hear you guys know?” poky said. ( cuts to alba and archer) “ hmmm lets do this room” * alba complained* “ Your sign says easy in bold.” “ Hey, kid, just show me what you got first!” Archer said. * Alba smirked at archer as the door opened *..*the door opened fully and captured alba’s attention* * a bow spawned and alba jumped to capture it ``'' no arrow?” Alba asked with his mouth full. * archer shook his head back and forth with a smirk. “ o-ok cool” alba said as he got lower to the ground going into a jumping position. ( Action!) * alba jumped in the air with only the arrow and ran stabbing the arrows into the slimes* ( as soon and the slimes got stabbed they vanished and turned and slimecicles) ( The last slime appeared he was bigger than the rest) *regardless alba jumped and tried to pierce the bow into the last slime* It d
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* alba tilted his head* “ y-you guys can talk?” “of course we can talk” * The slime then tried to hit them with his right hand they jumped. “ I Thought you said this was eas-” * The slime jumps and manages to land an attack on alba* * archer lands and carries alba on his back* he then runs out of the room and the doors slam shut before the slime could land another attack* * Archer sighed.* (alba was unconscious from the hit) ( cuts to Topa and neo talking and poky talking to another dog that had light white fur ) * archer comes into the room sighing with alba on his back * Neo’s the first one to notice * “ What happened to alba? Is he ok?” * he comes running. As the rest of the dogs followed. “ we were training and he got hurt.” “ he's just unconscious.”
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* Neo sighed in relief * “ opal, can you heal him?” Archer asked, staring at the white dog. “ oui, I can do what I can” opal shook her head up and down and carried alba to the next room. “ What did you do?!” “ We were training and bogour decided to-” Archer was cut off “ YOU NAMED HIM?” ( a long silence) *Archer sighed* “ I knew this would be too much for him.” * he looked at neo and topa* “Do you guys know his parents?” Archer asked. “ No, He did mention that he used to live in the kingdom's village. And he used to be a guard so maybe his family are villagers.” topa replied. “ He’s awake!” opal yelled from across the room * The dogs ran into the next room when they saw alba. Alba had a large smile on his face. He looks like he hasn't suffered a scratch. * “ I’m ready to train again,” Alba said with a large smile.
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*rest of the dogs were visibly confused * “ Alba, young lad, I won't be training you. Tomorrow you guys could fight basic slimes but I'm afraid the ones I have here are too dangerous.” *Alba’s smile slowly disappeared* “But I thought you said you were the best of the best” Alba frowned * The room was silent. Alba stood up.* “ Well, that’s fine.” he said, looking at his paws. He then looked up with a forced smile and saddened eyes. “ “W-why is it? That I take everything for granted?” Why still mantating a forced smile he walked backwards slowly. ( Pokey then ran and hugged them) “ I know we just met, but I can tell you're a good kid. Poky said, looking at him with sorrow. The room grew quiet. “ Um, excuse me but I just want a breath of fresh air,” Alba said while walking out the cave. He was in the outer part of the cave while looking at the crystal dripping water. He failed to notice the slime caving him in. Once he noticed it was too late and the slime overthrew him. ( black screen) “ You must be proud of
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around. “ TOPA!” Neo and alba yell ( flashback ends) Shows topa about to be attacked by a slime but then suddenly pushed. “ edit this
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Topa's reference ( outdated ) the updated version won't have much of a change though.
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Updated ref: content://media/external/downloads/141303
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( just copy and paste it into a new tab)
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Refs for beau and alba ( keeping) (Fiffy and Orion are background chachters that will appear later)
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Neo's ref (outdated):
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Neo reference ( updated)
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Happy ( updated )
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Alba ( updated wed apr,20th )
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Beau ( updated Thur, apr 21st.)
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( fiffy/Peno ) updated reference
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(Backgrounds for series)
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Mines:
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Entrance
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Chapters summary:
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Chapters 1 ( i think) mad prince who people hated hin
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Chapter 2 ( I think) neo fell into his foot steps
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Chapter 3 ( neo,topa and alba go into cave to mine
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Chapter 5: yes, 5. They convince lucky/,happy to be good and he goes with alba, neo and topa to Wich it switches to their perspective.
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Sneak peek 1!
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(TFD) animation sneak peek
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