It's fine ^^
It's just that my grammar is bad, plus, here in Serbia we don't actually have a reading teacher- Fun facts, i think not-
And for the settings- Maybe at the park? But idk bout the time
*Somewhere nearby, leaning against a wall at the opening of an alley. The park is left then a couple feet away from them, and they are watching people go along with their lives.*
*Notices her but they don't say anything, and continues looking forewords. They have one leg up against the wall, and one by their side. A lolipop is in their mouth, and their jacket is unzipped.*