Not too bad!!! All I can say is if you were trying to go as close as you could for her, try to use thinner lines. I know you often have characters that are more cartoony, which I adore, so this is pretty amazing! Keep doin' whatcha do! You gained a like plus a follower.
:3 oh thank you for you advise I will make Shure to try that. And thank you for saying thare cartoony that is whut I'm going for I can draw anime I just don't like to tho :3