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kiggle-snips[OP]
05.10.2020 22:34
LinkNow I'm putting a trigger warning for this contains scenes involving violence, suicide and pretty upsetting backstory plots so don't say I didn't warn you
and this is just a rough draft of my thoughts and ideas not the actual story))
kiggle-snips[OP]
05.10.2020 22:44
LinkSo anyway Jack was a very strange child, he and his family lived in Britain for most of his childhood, they did eventually move to Boston Massachusetts.
Most people often stayed away from Jack due to his peculiar behavior and such, but that didn't bother him too much since he wasn't exactly a fan of most people his age.
When He was in his later teen years his family started getting stricter with him due to them being sick of his nonsense. It seemed that his uncle was infact the one person that actually understood the boy and his strange personality. But that didn't last very long since his uncle caught the sickness that they were trying to avoid and soon died leaving behind a prized possession he had given to Jack.
When he was of age jack decided that he was tired of being another useless flesh bag on the face of the earth and decided to run off and join the first world war, His smart nature got him by rather well until that awful day his plans backfired, Leaving a hole.. in his head..
kiggle-snips[OP]
05.10.2020 22:52
LinkBut somehow he was not killed by that shot to the head, he actually came out alive and mostly well with the help of a one eyed puppeteer from Spain that went by the name Raymondo. But the one thing wrong is that Jack could not remember anything from his life
Raymondo and Jack ended up very close to one another, almost like family. Jack soon fell in love with a young woman and they had a child together. Everything was finally working out and they were happy, until jack's wife and son ended up going missing. His wife was found dead but there was no trace of where his son could have gone.
He was absolutely devastated by the news of his wife and child being gone. Raymondo tried his best to comfort the traumatized lunatic and during that time they ended up calling in love with one another.
kiggle-snips[OP]
05.10.2020 23:01
LinkJack one day decided that he was fed up with not knowing who or what could have caused such a tragic event in his life and he made it his goal to find whoever did this and make them pay for their crimes. Not to long later he did end up finding this person by mistake.. and he murdered them. Jack had completely lost his mind due to the fact he actually had the guts to murder someone with his own hands but yet.. he loved the feeling of strangling the anger right out of his system in the same way he would attack his victims. This news eventually reached Raymondo but unlike any sane person Raymondo ended up helping jack with his awful hobby.
Jack later realized he could not live with the guilt of mutilating all of those other people, he did not want to turn himself in due to the fear of his lover being put in jail so he did the only thing he could think of in that situation that would have everyone be happy.. so he thought..
kiggle-snips[OP]
05.10.2020 23:07
LinkHe choked himself to death using the old rope tied to the ceiling of the back room of his house. Raymondo was absolutely mortified due to the fact the love of his life was now dead in his arms. Jack felt horribly guilty for leaving poor raymondo all alone and ended up trying to figure out a way to re-incarnate himself so Ray could be happy once again.
No one is sure how jack did it but his demented soul now wanders the streets, Looking for the love of his life and trying to make up for all the mistakes he had made though the normal beings still feared him due to his now horrifying appearance and tall figure.
kiggle-snips[OP]
05.10.2020 23:07
Linkok I'm not fully done with this but you get the point. And I'm still trying to figure out how to end the story correctly))
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