i am no way better than you are being in any way mean to trying to act better than anyone here i am giving crit on your anims, SPECIFICALLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM things i've learned from PERSONAL EXPERIENCE i am in no way shape or form saying your work is trash or your bad at art at all. we are all good at art in our own way and work hard on our creations i have things that i can improve upon, we all do, we aren't perfect, we make mistakes, we learn also this is the thing that won the poll

thankyou!

okay anim 1- the proportions of the cat are very off, i myself can;t draw animals well either, also maybe make a clearer indication of the perspective of the legs,the back legs look like the switch in some frames and anim 2- its pretty okay, maybe make it a bit slower to help people understand whats going on a bit better

yeah, it looks like they alternate sides in some frames

maybe make gold's arm, which is on the other side of the body a bit more bent to to help with perspective

the first one is pretty a-okay, maybe add a bit of shading to the hair and ear things at the ends to help with what i think in lighting the second one i, im not good with anime shit oof

wouldn't that be considered vore then? is good, i remember the hidden messages in it also the arms break at the end of the shirt sleeves, they are pointy at the deformity

isn;t it he vored like a shit on of stuff he was probably the best for vore

okay, maybe have a set side of the canvase of which your point of light is coming from, it will help witht the water, highlights and shading the water is dotty and the perspective of the patched of land she is sitting on is something you could work on a bit, im working on perspectives too

1- maybe keep the thickness of the line work more consistant with the piece, also DRAW THE OTHER EYE, in like most of you work, you always have the other eye covered or not there 2- maybe work on the anatomy a bit

take a bit more time to make sure the colors and lines are more clean and smooth, and that the light splitting thing is more consistent

and the second one maybe make the lines more straight

i see a star somewhere in it, and a heart, maybe in there is a eye, tryin to see the obvious one oof also this is really great, its just amaizng the colors are so pleasing to the eye, the lighting and sading on point and just SFbjskeoajdnfdkjqenafsjowkaAAAAAAA anatomy is GREAT! well done

1-, nice, maybe work on the proportions of the face and shoulders 2- ^^ 3- the hair should be covering both eyes, also the hair is a bit wobbly

its really really good, reported for a feature! since i fiest saw your work and now you have gotten so much better well done!

okay first things first @lexi, don't comment on others comments unless they ask or if its an rp or conversation, its really annoying and rude

okay, work on the anatomy, the boobs and hips are too exaggerated for your style, add more frames to make the animation smoother also its backstory is super cliché and very mary-sue like, her backstory dosen;t explain much and is so generic, she needs more human flaws and details of her life

and lexi the characetr us very very generic the neon eyes are too bright, maybe make them less neon and more pastel, make the design more unique and recognizable, axo's design is simple and has evolved over time to what it is now, she is navey and has a non logical big ass hair floof

okay here are fa etiquette tips - DON:T ADVERTISE unless its on a anim like this or on anims called "advertise here" its annoying as all get out - there is gore, nsfw and inappropriate shit, its like half of this site's shit - profanity isn;t real no more, swearing is very ****ing common and like everyone oe uses some shitty or crappy swear word, don;t be a cunt about it, no *****ing (im using like a shit ton of cusses are a joke so chill) - make sure you always credit for files and donn;t be a hypocrite

part of the art is the backstory, crit is t help you, and yes, i swear A LOT, ik, im fine with it, don't us it much irl becuase of the obvious, the backstory is part ofthe art, i myself have issues with characetr development and i want to help you where i have had issues so you don;t have to deal with it too, i gave you the actual crit, good luck with the backstory and best wishes, make sure you have fun, remeber the disclaimer http://flipanim.com/anim=6r1nFTov#comment-kt9hnl5BCuE8

its well made and consistant with the story maybe make the hand writing more legible, i need to do that too irl oof

its well made and great (congrats on the feature!) the hair texture is amaing and thr texture in general is great!

okay hm the chin is a little off centered and when you got to the clothes it looks a little messy

1- yes, edgy af, work on anatomy a bit, and it looks unfinished, maybe its a wip, idk 2- it doesn't have enough contrast from the background, also it looks like it has tittys, idk, the coloring is very messy and anatomy could use some work, but the hand on the right is on point

don;t worry, remember, its okay to be a little late, take some more time to put a little extra effort into a piece, a little goes a long way