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29.03.2023
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29.03.2023 18:18
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im not a profesioenal this will just be based off of what i know and my preferences n art send 1 only 1 piece pls and ill critique it :D
29.03.2023 18:19
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no you ownt
29.03.2023 18:19
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😡😡😡😡😡!!!!
29.03.2023 18:19
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29.03.2023 18:30
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the colors u use r rlly nice but i feel like when u put that layer of pinkish color over it takes a bit away from the piece- u could try making a layer above and putting some highlights around the character or wherever the light source is^^ also try using different color schemes u seem to use alot of bright pink colors which is totally fine but itd be cool to see some different colorsz frm u^^ also i notice in alot of ur pieces they seem very 2d and flat so try n study 3d objects n think of the character as 3d instead of 2d when u draw them. also adding some different line thicknesses (like making it thicker where corners meet in the lineart) can give it some depth- ur art is great tho n dont put too much pressure on urself to improve bec u will overtime lovely art tho:)
29.03.2023 18:20
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29.03.2023 18:20
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29.03.2023 18:38
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SHE SLAYYY shes uncolored so i don have anything to say bout the colorfs but damn those eyes😳😳😳 anyways her expression is kinda confusing bec her eyebrows are indicating shes sad or upset, but she has her tongue sticking out so maybe try practicing expressions a bit? they r pretty easy to study n u could try practicin by looking at references of diff expressions n drawing those^^ ur lineart seems a bit messy that can be nice sometimes but try n use smoother lines for like the face n stuff because the skin is usually smooth- u could also incorporate some thicker lines in the parts of the lineart where theres corners n important parts of the face^^ also for the shading dont be shy!! add darking shading around the har n stuff u can define it better doing that and u could shape the shading into hair strands so the hair looks more hairy😭idk why i said that but got damn those eyes🥺
29.03.2023 19:57
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THANK YOU SO MUCHHH
29.03.2023 18:20
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29.03.2023 18:43
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vry cute bunni i dont think i have much critique only things i notice is the bunny is off center n theres alot of empty space so maybe put them in the middle? also the curve of the top of the wing is a bit off looking the curve usually happens at the middle i believe. u could also make it pop more by adding a brighter highlight n then putting a vry bright pink next to it would look rlly cool- also it seems to be lacking an expression maybe giving it a little eyebrow? n make it sad?
29.03.2023 18:43
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also u could add some fluffy texture to make it look more like fur!! thatd look super cute
29.03.2023 18:45
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it was a shading test but ty :3
29.03.2023 19:04
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ohhh !
29.03.2023 18:20
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Pfp ples
29.03.2023 18:22
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29.03.2023 18:45
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I’M NERVOUS
29.03.2023 18:54
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can i just say i love ur style so much🥺🥺🥺 honestly don have much u could add a brighter highlight on the hair^^ maybe some cheek flush thatd look cute^^ also ur lines seem a bit sketchy try n be more confident w ur lineart^^ just adding som basic shading to the hair and suite would go a long way- n her hand is a bit confusing but like ur art tho😳😳😳😳😳😳
29.03.2023 18:54
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Your making me ugly smile stopp 😞
29.03.2023 18:58
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The Asuka art was made w strong feelings in mind which is why I like it sm lineart is definitely one of my biggest struggles so it’s not shocking you pointed it out I always enjoying seeing you pop up
29.03.2023 19:03
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strong feelings make the best art frfr youll improve automatically overtime!! don stress over it too much omg 🥺omg ty shawty
29.03.2023 18:20
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29.03.2023 20:05
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hmm its a ref i dont have much to say tbh cute style tho omg u could add a shiny highlight on the hair thatd look rlly nice n focus more of the attention on her face^^ also the bg color is rlly saturated n kinda distracting maybe something a bit lighter?^^ maybe give her some eyebrows n define her expression a bit more^^ also i feel like she should be more in the center of the page bec she is the main focus
29.03.2023 18:21
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04.04.2023 17:36
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love the colors and textures sm!! few things i notice is the anatomy could do some work- try practicing from reference when u draw fb characters^^ shes kinda lacking an expression and giving her one would make the piece alot more interesting^^ also some different highlights on the hair like if you added an orange color itd look rlly nice- also working on poses too!! use references w that but makin the pose more dynamic will make the piece more interesting for sure
29.03.2023 18:22
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04.04.2023 17:39
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lovely colors shawty i feel like u could make the colors pop even more by adding a lightsource maybe on the plants or somethin also i feel like theres alot of empty space above the character so just moving it up a bit would fix that or even making it bigger maybe giving it an interesting expression would give the char a more interesting personality would be cool!! i think its a cow? try studying from some refs- even drawings would be good! and u could add some leaves blowing to add movement to the piece^^ very cool overall
29.03.2023 18:22
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pee eff pee
04.04.2023 17:43
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SHE GAY SO EXTRA POINTS SHAWTY her sitting pose is a bit awkward- next time you want to draw a pose and arent 100% sure how always turn to a reference!! youll learn so much just from using them and improve alot^^ also the blocks arent really following any perspective- try and imagine them in 3d space- or even just practicing drawing blocks from reference photos or irl will def help!! also you have some nice shadows going on but there isnt much of a lighting going on- just adding some simple lighting on the opposite side of the shadows will give it some pop!! love her expression she slayinh
29.03.2023 18:24
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https://flipanim.com/anim=0jmya9d1 Lol!!! Moment
04.04.2023 18:16
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😳💅ur style oh my the back leg seems a bit wonky to me- just studying a few animal anatomy refs could help^^ some basic shading under then neck, around the front arm and other places would definitely make it look more 3d- maybe put something around the char that represents them- like lightning or something thatd look cool- the face is the focal point adding some shading and highlights to the eyes would look nice- and some highlights on the hair^^
29.03.2023 18:25
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https://ibb.co/0qm7F11 If it isn’t too much trouble
29.03.2023 18:32
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https://paste.pics/MSFO5
29.03.2023 18:32
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29.03.2023 18:43
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29.03.2023 18:44
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I'm MUCH better drawing off of the computer but here's an ok drawing from last year:
29.03.2023 18:45
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*2 years ago sorry
29.03.2023 18:46
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you could also do my pfp if you'd like something newer from me
29.03.2023 19:31
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Could you critique this animation? Ty
29.03.2023 20:02
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It’s a work in progress rn)
29.03.2023 19:58
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Ooo okie
29.03.2023 19:58
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29.03.2023 20:04
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offsite art i did a few months ago https://ibb.co/nz9NJV9
29.03.2023 20:13
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stares politly
29.03.2023 21:42
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I'm probably too late for this but here
29.03.2023 21:53
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29.03.2023 21:54
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HEY CRITUQUE THIS SHIT
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29.03.2023 23:59
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ouf hold on
30.03.2023 00:00
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worked forever on this but im more proud of my pfp ngl :sobbing:
04.04.2023 18:06
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ik u wanted my to critique cuz u asked ima do urs early :P very cool perspective love the idea oml hmm i think the eyes are more in the bg so they should be a darker shade cuz they kinda are taking away from the focal point- also the eyes all look very different and a bit wonkey- maybe making them all in a circle looking at her. and u could add a highlight on them bec theres glowing from the thing she is eating. also maybe instead of the glowing food being white maybe make it red or yellow itd give it a more interesting feel and you could add some color on the surroundings. the clothes feel a bit flat imagine that theres a 3d object under there- using reference for poses like this will rlly help^^ love the expression
30.03.2023 16:53
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ill do more of these after school
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