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Guitar
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Learning how to fly
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Knock knock -doodle
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Untitled
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another kid drawing of me cuz
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A bear who became black...
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Critique me!
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3 comments
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Luciethekiwi[OP]
16.09.2020 14:47
LinkIts ok, no matter how much you critique me, I wont think youre rude
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NO OFFENSE, and also you asked..
Your art has very harsh lines that make it look cartoonish, maybe you wanna work on curving the lines properly? No well-drawn art person has STRAIGHT arms, STRAIGHT shoulders, you wanna give it a bit of natural curve on the shoulder, neck, arms and whatnot.