Some imfo on my eddsworld AU

27.05.2018 16:26

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Dakr(tom) is just upset because she didnt have agood child hood, and lever learned how to love. when she met apple(tord) she started to understand ho much it hurt. When ever hey hung out she was happy but one day tord got mad at her but the next day acted like things were normal. Dark forgave tord, even without an apology, but tord now only gets close to her if tord wants something. Dark feels like tord is just a play date, but doesn't know why she cant stop falling for her.

27.05.2018 17:22

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oh sweet lord why am i laughing at this... why what but that is really sad ;-;

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27.05.2018 17:23

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your porbley laughing because its based off of playdate ((the song))

27.05.2018 17:24

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i mean im not laughing for some reason im just in a really good mood i guess

27.05.2018 17:25

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lol anyway i hope the update is ok with you you are my co editor so your oppinion really matters.

27.05.2018 17:28

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i mean.. i wanna keep this more cannon like honestly but i guess we could alter it a bit

27.05.2018 17:28

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oh ok! -grabs pern and paper- what should we do?

27.05.2018 17:28

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*pen

27.05.2018 17:34

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XD well you could keep the dark backstory, but don't make it too big, instead of abuse, you could have a farther that died, or left the family when she was young. and i don't mind if she has a crush on tord, just don't make it too big, and along the lines of a playdate, or toy, tord would only be helpful to get something they want, but nothing like hitting on her, more of like complimenting, or getting something dark needs from somewhere or what not

27.05.2018 17:35

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yeah thats what i meant xD but i love your ideas and thinking.

27.05.2018 17:37

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thanks

27.05.2018 17:38