also i changed his hoodie color cuz that yellow was just a bit much

Comet:" Yo-You picked up?!" *He seems both relieved and shocked at the same time*

Comet: "I thought that you had forgot about me!" (no comet, i forgot about you)

Comet: "Same here! But you tell me first." *He said happily, but a hint of sadness in his voice.*

Comet: *Gasps, then drops the phone. It clatters to the floor, and he just stands there for a minute or two before picking it back up* "Wa-Wah?"

Comet: "When did that happen?! That's great Cloud!" *He feels happy for her, but sadness grips his heart when he realizes his best friends married, and already has children. Yet he doesn't have anyone.*

Comet: "I-im fine, really." *he says, dismissing her comment* "So, what are their names?"

Comet: "Aww, those are cute names. They sound adorable." *hears her through the phone* "Huh? whats ugly?"

Comet: "Y-you have scars on your wrist? are you okay? did you hurt yourself?"

Cloud: "Huh? Do you mean your old boyfriend you told me about that time?" *he suddenly feels protective over her. After all, i don't think he ever actually found out who her old boyfriend was.*

Comet: "I wish I had known you at the time, i would have beat his tail." *He says, even though he probably wouldn't be able too* (i just realized that cloud is probably like 5 or 6 years older than comet)

(xD) Comet: "Probably not, i didn't really know many people. The only guys i ever meet were my brothers friends and they didn't talk much." (wait does cloud even know atlas is comets brother, or did she figure it out because of the fact half of comet looks exactly like him)

(wait im remembering this story right arent i)

Comet: "Oh, it was only one brother. I think he said we had a sister too, but i never meet her. She must have left with my dad." (omg cloud iSnT iT oBvIoUs xD)

Comet: "...?"

Comet: "Uh..Why did you say..? Nevermind." *he shrugs it off, confused* "But yeah she probably went with him after the divorce. My brother said she was really mean though..."

Comet: "Oh, you know someone named Atlas too? I didn't know it was such a common name."

(oh snap is this bout to get real?)

Comet: "Yeah, so was my brother. Guess that names popular in Dark grey cats." (comet doesn't have much common sense just give him a sec)

Comet: "What? What wrong? ..Are you okay?" *he beccomes worried when she doesn't respond. He hears a crash in his kitchen.* "Ill be back in a sec-" *he says as he also sets the phone down and goes to check it out*

(actually i think at this point hes not ever going to realize lel) *He returns and picks up the phone again.* "Sorry, a bird got into an apartment, An- Cloud? You there?" *he wasn't getting a response*

Comet: "Oh thank god you responded, I started to think something happened to you." *he sounds relived* "Uh..are you ok, you sound a bit...odd."

Comet: "Yea actually, when i was still a kid. It was sad, he was closer to me than anyone else. And..are you sure your okay.. you have me really worri-' *CRAASHH* "hold on..!" *he sets down the phone* (DaRn bIrD)

Comet: *frantically tries to push the bird back out through the window. Didn't he just close that window already?*

(clouds life is flashing before her eyes xD)

Comet: *Hes back holding the phone again. He must have managed to get the bird outside. These video games must be affecting his memory-* "Uh yea, actually. I don't know why though."

Comet: "No, don't be silly. That would mea-...*He must have realized something, as he suddenly drops the phone.*

*He just..stands there. Staring at a wall, in total shock he cant do anything but stare.* *He hears a beep, and looks down to find he just pressed the "End Call button"

Comet:" Okay, Weird. Is something wrong with him? He frantically calls Cloud back* "Come on..Pick up..Pick up..

Comet: "Oh no.. Oh no.." *He drops his phone, and slowly slouches down against the wall. Putting his head in his knees, and covering his face with his arms*.

Comet: *He wipes away his tears, and jumps up* {Ive got to go find her!} *He rushes towards the door, and grabs his coat, but as hes turning the doorknob..His vision fades to black* (im sorry i just love unnatural and supernatural crap

(lel this next part takes place some hours later)

(he pretty much collapsed and is in a hospital or something now)

(wanna skip or no)