Want me to critic your art
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GalaxyStars 
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17.01.2019
24 comments
GalaxyStars[OP]
17.01.2019 01:06
LinkJust leave a ref here-
xxBloomingrosexx
17.01.2019 01:07
Linkfa sped it up but
here ya go. uwo
GalaxyStars[OP]
17.01.2019 01:08
LinkK
GalaxyStars[OP]
17.01.2019 01:10
LinkOk-
This is gr8 , the animation smooth, but the eyes kind curve upward a bit while opening. Also, the blush could’ve grown a bit smoother. The lines get kinda messy at some points, and the chest area is wide. Also, the ears have different kinds of tip endings, and one just stops.
xxBloomingrosexx
17.01.2019 01:12
Linkah, yes.
thank you.
and i'll try to fix those mistakes. :D
GalaxyStars[OP]
17.01.2019 01:13
LinkUwU np
Kay. I have three things.
1. The lines can get a bit messy at points, like at the chest
2: the shading is good, but it kinda seems a little messy.
3; I can see at some points where the colors go out of the lines.
Other then that, I don’t see anything
Okay,
1. Tbh, it looks like a slug is on its back and the paw lines are messy. The head lines are a tad messed up but I still loaf this anim.
omg tysm lol
at least I got a couple tiips and someone who likes my anim
I already know messy lines will be on here because I use a mouse XD
1: the shading is a tad bit messy
2: THAT FLAP SO SMOTTH-
3: like you said , the lines are messy aswell
It’s good tho and I’m going to bed now-
K
I loaf dogs so I instantly loaf this one but, the lines are a tad messy and on the bandanna the fur color goes into the bandana, so overlapping colors
I found literally nothing except that the bloody paws are a tad bit floatish and the eye shading is a lil messy
But I loaf it
