Okay, all in all, it was pretty good. I liked the plot of it, and ima have to say the flower crown scene was my favorite. But uh... if I’m being honest it wasn’t as good as people make it out to be. There was hardly any punctuation, and the grammar was off. It would have been nice for me to read from paragraphs instead of a large box. And I would have liked a little more character development. But I mean, it’s pretty good. I read all of it in a matter of ten minutes so...

Sorry if that offends anyone.

Ima make a new TomTord fanfic btw (kill me) called Flower Boys