brutally honest improvised
21 comments
Glitchfoxchan
18.03.2020 01:25
LinkGo on
Glitchfoxchan
18.03.2020 01:29
LinkKittyMoon[OP]
18.03.2020 01:34
LinkThe background again is blank, which makes the character float when it isn't. Add a small shadow underneath so it doesn't float.
The head seems to be bigger than the body. Make the head smaller but a teensy bit bigger than the body, not too far though. There should be details like shading and more outlines to the background and the art itself. There also seems to be little movement to this anim. Try adding more animations on everything.
1. Anne boleyn
The hair seems to be a bit overdetailed and the dress looks exaggerating. Reduce the patterns on the dress and add less detail to the hair.
2. Buttons
Like the first anim, you put excessive detail. Reduce the detail part so it looks good.
3. eboy
The arms seem to get bigger when you animate it. Make sure that the arms are the same size as the first part.