no empathy

4 comments
NeatDude
20.12.2020 02:33
Linkgo off :)
Tropicoline[OP]
20.12.2020 02:47
Linkthere is no shading other than his eyes
it hard to tell what is in the background
a miniscule amount of detail
rough outlines
raccoons dont live in dens they live in trees
its hard to tell his arm from his torso (you should add lines there)
and there should be more details pointing to the fact that it is raccinnit, like tommyinnit, perhaps a coke can
darklord334
31.12.2020 02:16
Linkhows this
Tropicoline[OP]
07.01.2021 13:38
Linkless contrast between the electric and dark part of him.
also lightning isnt that thin, and a bit of shading, maybe linework to differ darkvolt from the background.