constructive criticism?
by:
Sam-xXAMTXx 
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30.11.2020
10 comments
Sam-xXAMTXx[OP]
30.11.2020 18:16
LinkI will not be "Ew cringe" to you if your not "Ew cringe" to me.
I will try MY BEST. To give advice, tell you flaws, and what your doing right!
Please try to keep it friendly! Dont be a total ass! I will be deleteing comments of anyone whos just like
"Haha ur art stinks"
since
a. NOT CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM.
b. THIS IS CHARACTER RELATED. NOT ART.
I hope i can help out! :D
Sam-xXAMTXx[OP]
30.11.2020 18:17
LinkJust comment a character ref and a description of their summed up backstory and/or personality!
Sam-xXAMTXx[OP]
30.11.2020 18:20
LinkIf you want to criticize my characters simply pick one from the folder.
example:
Hey, How about ____? Whats their personality/summed up backstory?
also. i will be doing the "criticism" based off these three categories;
Design.
Backstory
Personality
Once again! Please be nice! You do not have to take into account any of what i've said! this is just my opinion!
Sam-xXAMTXx[OP]
30.11.2020 18:21
Link-This will always be open, wether or not i reply within a good period of time is questionable haha :')-
hmm, this isnt entirely on one character specifically,,
but on like one or two characters the coloring on some of their accessories/clothing doesn't really match with the rest of the character. the designs themselves are cool and maybe the color thing is a style choice but changing the shade on some colors so they flow with the rest of the other character would look a bit better in my opinion
so far from what i see,, Wisteria,, her hair and eye colors dont really match up with the wing and clothing colors,,
and lukes socks/pants colors dont match up that well with the rest of his coloring
sorry for not being specific :pensive:
Oh. Well with Luke he wasn't really- raised with a good fashion sense, hence why hes wearing multicolored tights and a black cold shoulder sweater.
Wisteria? Oh yeah i really needa fix her,, shes- shes- efivuhuiqrehivuher
ohh, well that makes more sense
I mean she is really cute just the color scheme need to be fixed a little