i would suggest fixing the posture from slightly slanty to a bit strighter. try to even the face out it is a little wide, also you forgot to fill the hair area betwen the legs. i am try ing to work on anatomy, i suggust you should to try a bit less shine in the eyes, of which i love how you colored. remember that this is my opinion and that you can chose wether you want to take it to heart or not. thanks for listening to my thoughts

i forgot how to spell between for a second while typing this ha

yes it is

i commented on the other art more