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23.06.2020
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red561[OP]
23.06.2020 15:20
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:D
23.06.2020 15:21
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it looks good! but can i give some constructive criticism? :p
red561[OP]
23.06.2020 15:22
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sure :>
23.06.2020 15:26
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Ok so the first thing is that one leg is thicker than the other, and you should look out for things like that in the future The other thing is that the shading is kind of off. The hair lighiting shouldn't be everywhere if the light isn't coming from the front, only mostly where the light is coming from. Also, the shadows should be on the opposite side of where the light hits the object, and the shadows on the top of the hair and the chest area don't make a lot of sense since those places are directly hit by the light. The shadows should be on the left side of the body only if the light is coming from the right side, and not only the shirt and hair should have shadows. It still looks really nice though :> and I hope that made sense
red561[OP]
23.06.2020 15:32
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:> okie
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