Dragons- lurking in the dark
Zigzag the Grand Vizier 2
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86 comments
Moonstar[OP]
17.11.2021 13:57
LinkSO.
I’m going to be critiquing your art. I will be honest. I will be brutal.
I am in no way a professional, but I have been drawing for over 12 years.
I will be rating on a scale of 1-10. 1 being the lowest, and 10 being the highest.
Attach at least 1 anim. You can do more if you’d like.
Do not join if you are a sissy and can’t handle criticism.
I will not be gentle with your art.
Moonstar[OP]
17.11.2021 13:58
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Moonstar[OP]
17.11.2021 13:59
LinkIdea yoinked from @HolyHeccThatsGud
go check out their channel!
Moonstar[OP]
17.11.2021 13:59
Link@HolyHeccThatsGud:
Moonstar[OP]
17.11.2021 14:45
Linkalso dont take all of my critiquing personally. a lot of them are just jokes and not me trying to be mean.
Stuff about anatomy and color and shading is my advice on how to fix it.
if it sounds like a joke it is a joke (i.e. for @frostbitedraws's oc i said it has chicken pox. That is a joke.)
For the second one:
The concept is cute, but the outline is wobbly. If you use the magnifying glass in the tools, you can zoom into the piece and make smoother lines.
Personally, I dont like black outlines. I like outlines whose colors are just darker versions of the main colors. This bit about the outline won't count toward the final result, btw.
And try shading! You'd be surprised at how shading can help your art.
6.5/10
The third one's animation is a bit choppy. Have you heard of smear frames? (not sarcasm) they can make the animation much more smooth. Look up what smear frames are and how to draw them and they will help your animation tremendously. The cat is cute, but again, your lineart is wobbly.
6.9/10
The final one is... odd.
The proportions are off, the legs have no form, and why is their blood the same color as their fur?
The head is part of the torso in this and the tail looks like a wing for some reason.
The bone in the arm is the right type of bone, though wether or not that was on purpose is up for debate.
Lineart is less wobbly than the others.
7/10
the second one is...
what
what are those random floating dots next to the person?
The head is too big.
ALways remember that the entire person will measure five of their heads on top of each other. The arms will end a little less than halfway down the thighs. For the legs, the back of the thigh is straight, the front is curved. The bottom half of the leg, the calf, is the opposite: the back is curved and the front is straight.
Shading is nice enough, but the colors make her look completely purple.
6.7/10
Leaves. Of course I’m not going to put a clear coat around them because they’re in the background and the body is obvi not going to be proportional because it’s at an angle
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I accept the criticize.
The first one. I hate it too. The transition is really bad. The blood is inconstant.
Lol maggots. And very lazy.
Blok. bad tallons.
I CANT UNSEE CHICKEN POCK FROSTY-
Sorry its hard to make dragons look farther away- and its just my style, fire and blood have outline.
The animation is choppy, it was my first time in a while doing lip sync, I only had a couple hours do to that one.
QuIte fast, F L O A T I N G H A T The mouth is oldly soposto be like that, I made it my spoof map style, I wanted a difference with my spoof and normal map style.
Thanks!
KK
*Cracks knuckles*
*they glow like glowsticks*
The feather details are lost. The wings are too small. the bird has suuuuuuper long legs
shading is decent but the colors look weird. I dont know what it is. Maybe its those strange blobs in the background.
The foot thats supposed to be furthest away makes it look like both feet are on the same side of the bird
in fact, i cant tell which way this bird is supposed to be facing
overall this is fine. Not horrible, not amazing.
Just fine.
5/10