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20 comments
Blue1243
02.04.2018 01:24
LinkHonestly?i would say sometimes 5/10 but sometimes 8/10 I bet we can both improve our art with more practice though !
thelaughingpandaxo[OP]
02.04.2018 01:27
LinkSometimes I slack off cause I am tired lol. What could I fix though?
Blue1243
02.04.2018 01:29
LinkReally I don't want to be mean but maybe make your characters shoulders less broad but I think you should try new hair styles but I should do that too!
thelaughingpandaxo[OP]
02.04.2018 01:31
LinkYour not being mean just telling me what to fix. You should feel good about yourself cause I wanna fix my art to the best I can.
Well, I'm not one to rate art, so I honestly won't be doing that.
But I would love to give my feedback/praise to you, if you want to try to improve!
pFFt
I'm not recognized on this site at all. My best friend is one of the most known animators, and she's way better than me. xD
The day I become an art lord is the day I'm actually good at art.
But anyway,,
Feedback-
The body is a little wonky, and I suggest making a pose with your own body, and sort of imagining that pose as you draw your character. It's a trick I learned a while ago. ^^
Maybe try challenging yourself with different poses. The way to become a better artist is to always practice, so just keep that in mind!
Praise-
Hair style is quite complimentary to your style in general. I suggest keeping up with it and finding ways to make it more and more eye catching!
You're pretty good with colors, and your character's design is appealing to me, so I would experiment with using other characters and designs, just to practice with colors. :]
I’d have to say you’ve got a lot of potential so just know I’m not trying to be rude when I say the following(I know one too many people who get offended easily). You could definitely improve with a bit more anatomy practice. Try looking at refrence are for body shapes and and proportions. If it helps I can find some of my better refrence material that I uses a lot. It also helps a lot to know that the stereotype that girls are hour glasses and boys are triangles is actually true to a degree. I hope this helps! And just know I’m not trying to be rude and I did look at your art before saying anything so I could give an accurate feedback. But in short the best thing you could do for your art is to keep practicing and developing your own style as well as being open to suggestions and new techniques and such.