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21 comments
MEMEFRUIT[OP]
15.06.2020 20:14
LinkIt can be about me as a person or my art idc
MEMEFRUIT[OP]
15.06.2020 20:14
LinkAlso be as harsh as you want I can take it unlike past me who was a pussy
MEMEFRUIT[OP]
15.06.2020 20:21
Link*cutely taking notes on what everyone is saying so I can work on it*
You do well for the most part IMHO. I just think that you should try different angles to make it more captivating sometime.
Your art is better then mine will ever be.
But I feel like you should try something new.
Hm,, with your personality, there isn't anything that's bad about it.
With your art, there isn't anything really bad about it! The simplicity is really nice to see now-a-days! Maybe still work on anatomy when drawing humans, and yeah!
Other than that, your art is beautiful, and should be heavily loved for how it is!
You'll most likely need to work on yout linework more, its good how you do it now, but you may need to make them look a bit smoother. and sometimes when you shade, its kinda placed in weird areas, maybe like imagine where the ligjt is hitting your art, and shade those certain areas, so the shading wont look off.
i've told you this before, but i think the main problem with your style is that it's very limiting.
their's only so much you can improve with a style such as your own.
That's not always a bad thing tho, if it's what you want you don't need to change anything!
But i think the first step to improvement is to change your style, even if it's just a bit.
Maybe replace the head shape with something more realistic, or change the full body anatomy, something like that.
It'll take a lot of experimenting, but i'm sure you'll end up; with something great!
Of course these are all suggestions, so you don't have to taken them if you don't want to!
I'm not original so just read Antrace's comment again.
I ****ing love your style and I want-
Sometimes when you draw Gold it looks like he's eaten enough for 5 people and having no knees (sorry if that's how it's supposed to look omao), maybe try adding other detail like ribs? Like I said, not original-
I feel like making your characters do more poses would make pretty good progress in your art.
focus on anatomy a little more and maybe add some thicker and thinner lines in your lineart so its more interesting
try to make the lines more smooth like u used a line tool.
shading could use some work too