“She is loving and caring” “When someone flirts with her she blows them away” Stop making hypocrite OCs and acting like they’re perfect Also can we drop the air stereotype being loving and nice? Like dude have you been in a hurricane. Or a tornado. Or a blustery day. The wind cares not for your petty concerns of I have somewhere to be or I like my house being on the ground.

Ah yes the classic insult others to make yourself look good I probably don’t have as good of an idea as what to do what the classical elements, I’m just using them to symbolize the dichotomy between the protagonist and antagonist and how the protagonist is an inadvertent accomplice in the murders of her own friends, and to help there’s be more secure roles in the story than “someone from the protagonist group” and “murderer guy”

But no characters based on the classical elements are so much smarter and totally have never been done before

I was just trying to explain how making characters out of the classical elements was soooooooo much smarter than using it in a way that symbolizes the internal struggle of the characters,,,,, and if you dont udnerstand THAT then you need to read up n writing good characters.

which you already need to do most likely because my original comment wasn't even that fancy word-heavy.

no offence smilingneon but you shouldnt give critic unless its asked and kawaiiskele, smiling neon does kind of have a point but dont take it the wrong way to myself, stop butting into other peoples conversations

I agree 100% with shIny

Except at the smiling neon part. Its smiling Nyan X'D

no one ever ASKS for critic on this site they just act like they're oh so perfect and amazing and you know what? sometimes they need to get taken down a peg in the ego department.

*cough* she doesn't act "Oh so perfect" knowing her, she's definetly not perfewct. I'm not standing up for her because I know her Irl it's because you are kinda being a ***** go ahead and attack me, like i ****ing care, but it only shows that you can't take being called a *****. so h a h

*perfect

ok, you can call me what you want, I do agree that I've been acting a lot more dickish than usual and usually I act pretty dang dickish

It's fine. Most people get upset over things like that octavia.