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by: Gillian
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07.01.2018
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Laneycat11
07.01.2018 03:15
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thats fooking amazing
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:16
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Coconot
07.01.2018 03:15
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Add some lighting on the wings it kinda looks dull and stiff
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:16
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i tried to lol,look close
Coconot
07.01.2018 03:17
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Oof, it's very faint haha
Pomegranate
07.01.2018 03:15
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SCREEEEEEEEE
Pomegranate
07.01.2018 03:16
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Do gen wings have no shading? Or am I just blind?
Pomegranate
07.01.2018 03:16
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Also SCREEEEEEEEEEE
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:16
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ju be blind,i tried to shade them lol
Pomegranate
07.01.2018 03:17
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Also, one more time SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EPICNESS
07.01.2018 03:15
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25/10 amazing Although, whats with the kneecaps?
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:17
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i have weird knees
EPICNESS
07.01.2018 03:17
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understandable. 27/10
Pomegranate
07.01.2018 03:17
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Infinity/10
YBNightmare
07.01.2018 03:16
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the only thing i'd say is the feet
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:17
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i suck at drawing knees lol
GioDude
07.01.2018 03:17
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yo one leg looks shorter than the other, other than that it's pretty great
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:18
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it's oddly positioned,but understandable
GioDude
07.01.2018 03:19
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I can see what you were going for, but you didn't make it long enough going downward to look proportional, so it looks like the knee on the other leg s just higher up and longer
GioDude
07.01.2018 03:19
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Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:20
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yea i see what you mean
ShinyTheRandom
07.01.2018 03:17
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alright this is amazing but u asked for critique the tears one side seems to be almost above the eye, the purple-ish shading on the legs seems odd. plz don get triggered ;v;
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:18
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thanks lol
ShinyTheRandom
07.01.2018 03:31
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(also i asked more questions on the zorax post o<o)
KaylaBlue
07.01.2018 03:18
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Omgggg This is awesome! I would just say it seems like the neck is a little too long
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:19
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some of the shoulder and the neck is in there
KaylaBlue
07.01.2018 03:20
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Ohhh okay Then I don’t really see anything else xD (besides the wings, but I think white is hard to shade, at least for me -_- )
KaylaBlue
07.01.2018 03:21
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Ohh wait no, nvm One wing seems smaller ;-;
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:22
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one is folded inward,and the other one is kinda out
KaylaBlue
07.01.2018 03:25
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I know, but if you were to have both wings fold out It would look like one is thinner (the right) At least that’s what I see :/
KaylaBlue
07.01.2018 03:28
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Also if the neck and shoulders were in that scarf thing (idk what you call it) It would go out a little, showing that there’s a shoulder there (I feel like I’m being mean, I’ll stop)
thedrawer
07.01.2018 03:18
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(ノﾟДﾟ) I LOVE IT
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 03:19
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thx
thedrawer
07.01.2018 03:21
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Np
Pomegranate
07.01.2018 03:22
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Just going to... Casually.... Stick this... Right.... Here.
Pomegranate
07.01.2018 03:23
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And I have sucky timing once again
Thepapersandwich
07.01.2018 03:47
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So cute <3
Gillian[OP]
07.01.2018 11:34
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thanks ;v;
tazzybear
07.01.2018 20:53
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i think its fine
Devinception
10.01.2018 22:03
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It’s great Just the right arm sleeve thing seems a bit too small tho
puffypenguin
12.01.2018 00:13
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one arm is smaller then the other but the colours match perfectly with the mood
puffypenguin
12.01.2018 00:15
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ha auto correct thought i spelled "colours" incorrectly
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