I also feel like this portrays her character more accurately

I practiced drawing korean manwha/comic style and redrew this ---------> I think ima draw the main character next and then make this series. BTW how's my draw? .w.

OMG YEESSSS like what the heck this is so good

Also please rate my drawing ^_^

It'll take place in South Korea; this is the female protagonist. There's another main character though but I may or may not draw him