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ConstructiveCritique
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Registered: 17.11.2017
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17.11.2017 23:17
Ah this is so pretty! I love the colors you used and the background. The thing I have to say is that the composition doesn't make that much sense, it seems like oyu drew it a bit too small for the canvas. If you just made it a bit biggefr, that would be amazing. I also love the lighting you used , you seem to really understand how light falls on 3D objects! You're definitely a very skilled artist, and anything else negative I had to say is just a matter of personal preference, not anything objectively wrong.
17.11.2017 21:34
I’ve finished your review!
17.11.2017 21:33
First off, I don’t really understand the orange background. It doesn’t really harmonize with the rest of the colors. Secondly, skin isn’t naturally yellow. A quick way to make skin color would be to use the grey that’s just darker than white and use the paint roller tool to put a layer of dark orange on it. That’ll create a pretty good neutral skin tone that isn’t too pale or too dark. One thing to keep in mind when drawing humanoids is that the head isn’t a circular shape, it’s more like an egg shape. Hair also goes all the way around the head, and you can see it in the back. You seem to have potential, just not enough time spent experimenting with the different features of the site. Keep working on it and I’m sure you’ll improve!
17.11.2017 21:12
No problem! I have a lot of time on my hands anyways, because class isn’t the most thrilling time of day.
17.11.2017 21:11
Okay,
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