Closed because I dont feel like doing it anymore \-(シ)-/

Try drawing faces, instead of the hair covering your face, and maybe softer colors!

You should try working on your faces, because the eyes and mouths look a little wonky, also, try working on your shading, using the one wall paint tool thing (i forget what its called) isnt the best for shading.

Ask for nice good critism!!

You should really try practicing hands, but its really cool to see that youre actually practicing instead of just hiding them away! Also, try practicing anatomy ^^