Btw, this is a rewrite of the original prologue

How long has it been? 6 Months? 5? No, no; no that long. Maybe a couple weeks? Or a month and a half? It's really hard to tell with this dangerous canopy. I mean, I see the Sun, but it's still hard to keep track with everything in this crappy jungle trying to kill me. But still, someone has been looking for me right? They are maybe on this planet too, even! Sure, it may take a while, but I'm sure it will be soon! C'mon, think positive! I just wonder if I can connect to The Main soon, I hope so at least. Every time I turn the radio on, it beeps. And the annoying kind too, but there's something about it. -------- Am I losing it? Am I? I honestly hope not. That would be bad. I need to keep it together until someone comes to rescue me! C'mon, you can do it... Hopefully... --------

(continuing, and sorry that took me a while I got caught up on other stuff) What’s with these voices? And the constant beeping, I-I don’t like it. I just don’t understand, but I just feel like I should listen to them. “They don’t care about you, you’re just another old recruit that has done nothing, join us, we’ll care about you and be family.” “Just listen to the beeping, ignore yourself, just listen.” “Join us and you’ll be safe, be happy again, with not a care in the world.” It’s so tempting, but… but… What if they are looking for me? -------

(continuing again) It’s been so long… maybe 9 months? Who cares anyway, they’re right, they don’t care; I’m just another old recruit that hasn’t done anything important. I’m never going to get off this planet. Is there still the opportunity of giving up? Dying even? Might as well, as if anything matters now. “What if you join us? There is still that opportunity.” “Yes, just listen to us and the beeping, we’ll take care of you, we'll treat you as family, we’ll help you.” Listen… Just listen? To… the beeping? We’ll see if that works. And now it’s on…

I woke up in the grass, with everything looking the same, just with a heavy pink tint. What? W-where am I? Why-am I home? I-I got back. I got back home! I must not remember someone coming for me, well, that doesn’t matter, I’m back home! There’s everyone, it looks like we’re having a picnic, great! I saw the sky opening up, I saw something, I don’t know what. But I was too focused on greeting everyone. I felt something, like my body twisting, but I wasn’t moving. Oh well, ignore that, let's get to seeing everyone again!

--End Prologue-- OH MY GOODNESS, I definitely say this is better than the original. I am currently working on chapter 1, so I'll hurry as fast as I can. But, I hope you guys will enjoy this series, because this is definitely gonna get me into writing

Y'know what I shouldve added that screaming stuff part. Oh well too late! Anyway here is the original prologue if you wanna read it