yeet alright uh I love everything about it obviously lmao But if this annoys some people, the shading on the hair seems a bit strange only because you can see the lines from the shading The jaw from the animal kinda seems off,, its looks a bit square-ish near the front unless that's what you wanted That's literally the only flaws I see lmao

lol np

Okay I see some things The shading is a bit too unrealistic (not that you have to make it realistic or anything) it just seems a bit weird, even with the background, I'd suggest if theres some bright light behind the character you can put some shiny outlines around the character to make it more intriguing The perspective needs practice because the table looks very slim and if you want it like the cameras on the table you might need to make the table more wider at the sides The exit sign feels crooked, but you dont have to do anything about that The last thing is the lineart colour, you can make it more brighter if you wanted instead of black, imo black is really dull to use if your trying to do a glowing background behind it That's all I got c:

you got an anim you want me to critique or should I do your pfp?

god dang it that's really good All I'm gonna say is that add a bit more lighting and add shading to the skin sometimes If you can you can shade the grass, because all I do is make directional streaks on the grass using the lighting and boom you got some g r a s s

u h Your lines on your characters when you dont do realism look very weird, like the animals head might look squished n stuff The colours are also sometimes very bright and could hurt the eyes, maybe use pastel or grey-ish colours to fix that Shading is 👌, just need to know more about 3d surfaces and where the shading must go

Okay I'll use your pfp The colours are nice, just make it a bit lighter if you like that If you want you can shade to give your drawings more depth and interesting Thinner lines can be good for more detail, I'd that's what you like to do

The background can use some work, and shading would be good for this too, only if you wanted to

That's really good, better than my stuff lmao But im not here to praise The colours are spot on, If you like pastel colours maybe make the lineart a little bit lighter and size up your character unless you wanted it like that

Just add shading to add depth, lines so we can make up the image, and use lighter colours Also make the wing a bit bigger, maybe look at some birer anatomy to help you out c:

Lmao Add shading to it, and a background if you like Use a thinner line if you have to