Uh ok, 1: the necks are as wide as her body maybe make the shoulders a tad bigger? Or shrink the necks up a bit? 2: the heads are bigger then their body, how are necks not snapping? Shrink the heads up a bit 3: add more detail to the hair, like, this anim has her have like,frigging rape rapunzels hair, at the ends, make it like ho hair would look, 4: maybe shade? Use dark and light gray s instead of black to, Sooo, to rate you? Tbh, 4/10 no offense, you can practice! I’m not saying this to be mean I’m saying this so I can help you improve a bit!! That’s all,

4/5