Woah amazing!

https://www.google.com/search?q=battle+angel&tbm=isch&ved=2ahUKEwib8q3n4sHpAhWOdHAKHdgNDvgQ2-cCegQIABAA&oq=battle+angel&gs_lcp=CgNpbWcQAzIECAAQQzIECAAQQzIECAAQQzIECAAQQzICCAAyAggAMgQIABBDMgIIADICCAAyAggAOgQIIxAnULIeWIcqYKEraABwAHgAgAH1AYgBkw6SAQUzLjYuM5gBAKABAaoBC2d3cy13aXotaW1n&sclient=img&ei=iMjEXpuOOY7pwQPYm7jADw#imgrc=RMyDl1wpgBMaYM its reminds me of that

EPIC

I’ll ignore what you said and I’ll helpfully criticise (; you did a great job on the toning but what I would say is don’t be afraid to make some places even more dark, because if you looked in a mirror you would see how hard light hits and how intense shadows really are and with the colours and textures, I see you put a ton of effort on texturing the hair and maybe try drawing a few strands of hair kind of outside the “blob”/shape of the hair ig and also maybe add some slight freckles, when artists add freckles and other details it can really make a drawing hyper realistic, I also see that lots of people draw lips very pink, not sure if its lipstick or not but maybe make it slightly more peach and toned down you did very well and it’s looking great so far, very above average I’d say lol this probably took forever so I feel bad criticising so much lmao

One idea: search up proportions of faces. The eyes and mouth are a bit too big and the nose is a bit too skinny. There are some really helpful guides on the internet for proportions. I do agree with Floofery, you should add some loose hair strands and make it a have a bit more contrast. Otherwise, great job 👍

i agree with every one above me, but maybe you could make the lips a bit smaller with less pink, and the eyelashes smaller, and the eyes smaller (dont worry i struggle on that too-)