Listen to me ramble
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HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:34
LinkHolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:35
LinkOk I have had this scene playing in my head for like 3 days now and I need to write it down because I think it is amazing. I will probably figure out that it is not whilst writing it but idc I think its cute
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:38
Link> Backstory to make it make sense.
Okay to make the beginning of the story fairly simple;
The setting is in the future and space travel is fairly easy as long as you've been formally trained. Fletch is a newly-graduated space pilot working for the government and Usman is his assistant/the engineer.
Their job is to travel to newly developing plane, meet the locals, write down what they find, and if they find anything of value,,, they report back to Earth and come back to steal all their resources.
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:38
Link*NEWLY DEVELOPING PLANETS
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:41
LinkSo it's their first day on the job and their planet happens to be the one where Eilan lives. In the eyes of Usman and Fletch they are fairly primitive, their technology could probably be compared to 1900s America's lmfao.
Now this part of the story is kind of complicated and not fully planned out but but basically they are very religious/spiritual and they think that Usman and Fletch are there to save them because they are currently in a drought .
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:43
LinkBecause they are assholes they take advantage of that and are basically treated like Jesus Christ while they're there.
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:44
LinkEilan is doubtful about it though, because Usman and Fletch look literally nothing like how saviors are supposed to look according to their religion. So he basically stalks them to try and find some kind of proof that they actually aren't who they say they are.
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:47
Link(How he finds out isn't fully planned so it will most likely change so im not even gonna say how he finds out here lmfao) So Eilan somehow finds proof and goes to the rest of his people to show them.
And they're all like "ah ****, we gotta kill these people"
And Fletch is like "lol no im gonna steal ur prince"
And usman is like "bro no u can't steal the prince thats bad"
and then they take Eilan hostage.
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:51
Link>
And that's basically all I got for now lmfao. If I were to make a webcomic that would prolly be only the first 1-3 eps so,,, i got a lot more to make.
I do have random moments planned tho so I might say those here too
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
10.09.2020 00:52
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Also Soon after that I have this lil scene planned (its while Eilan still hates everyone)
So basically Eilan is still being held hostage inside their space ship thing and to scape he just,,, finds some tools,,, and takes off Fletch's legs while he's sleeping.
It doesn't work cause he can't use doors and they're in the middle of space but he tries
HolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
07.10.2020 00:40
LinkHolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
07.10.2020 00:40
LinkHolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
07.10.2020 00:41
LinkHolyHeccThatsGud[OP]
07.10.2020 00:41
LinkLike he has a half-redemption arc I guess? But he changes for not a good reason.
Basically all the humans and people on Earth are the main villains and the only reason Fletch goes away from them in the first place is cause he has the hots for Eilan and Eilan hates capitalism.