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Hmmm ok. So I like the design Ig, but you could maybe add more detail? I dont like way too complicated, but it lacks details that could be added. Also, the lines could've been smoother and the head couldve been a bit more rounder. I hope this helps you in the future!

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I really like the design! Its cute and very creative. For improvement, I dont really know what to say. I guess you could work on the fur? It would hype it up and the hair fur was kinda wonky

I hope this helps you!

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Thats neat! I like the smoothness of the lines and your creativity. For improvement, I would say to work on a bit of body anatomy. The shoulders are kinda off, so I would say to improve on that. I hope this helps you in the future!

Oh thats really good! I love the tweening parts in them. It was smooth! What I think you could improve on is on that part where it said Im happy all the time, you could make it a little smoother. The words just randomly popped in, and the eyes also did. I hope this will help you in the future!

:OOOO Thats nice!. Ok, so yeah, like you said, the hands could use improvement. And the part of the hair that was covering the left eye didnt look right. And the clouds were super plain. In a weather like that, clouds wouldnt be white. And the clouds should be translucent. I hope this helps you!

Your welcome!

Oh its fine! I forgot to say you could put as much as you wanted

Ok, the broccoli thing killed me XD. I love how you used your imagination and creativity, as that was something I would never have thought up of. For improvement, I would say that to clean the outline up. Some of the outlines werent attached or cleaned up, so I would say to work on that. Oh and I will do the rest later once I finish another person. Sorry. And I hope that will help

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Lmao look at MY art and you will see them mistakes XD

So for the Team Skyyee one, I like the shading. It looks cute! For improvement, I would say to fix the lines again like I said before, and then the eye? So I got confused, but The hair goes over the eye but it wasnt colored. If the eye was over the hair, then the outline shouldnt have been on top of the eye. So thats what I would say for that. Hope that helps you.

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Ok for the makeup one, I think you did well on the shading. But, I feel like you could add a bit more dimension to them and also work on adding more shading to the lipstick and mascara. Those to look kinda plain then the others. Maybe try adding more highlights to all of them ad darker colors for the shading.

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Your welcome! And for the last one, I would still say to work on cleansing the outline. Most of the time, I dont even do the sketch XD. Also, I would suggest you study lip syncing too, as it will help a lot with the fact that you are talking in your anims.

I hope all of this helps you!

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Woah thats good! I would say too work on the anatomy and sketch cleaning. The outline isnt clean and smooth, so I would say to work on that. Also, the neck is too long and maybe work on the shoulder. Search anatomy up on the web and they will help you a LOT. Hope this helps!

:OOOO ok, so I love the shading you made. It was good, and so was the tweening, but you CAN still improve on both of those. I would say to make the shading more smoother by using opacity and the tweening looks a bit odd. To fix the tweening, I would say to make the eyes or something on the body to move. The part looked odd bc it was moving it tail but there was not a single movement on the body. Hope this helps you!

Ok, so I really liked that drawing before. I would say for improvement to study on anatomy. The shoulders are sagging, which is why I would say to do that. Oh, and one part of the hair went through the shoulder, so I just wanted to point that out. And the blood. So the blood, I would say to improve on the drip, bc blood doesn't look like that when it drips. I hope this helps you!

No it didnt! Also, are you fine if I use your oc in a thing for my 200+ special?

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So I LOB it! I think for the first one, I would say to clean up the line sketch. Its a bit messy, I would say. I like the shading an I would say to shade the ear, bc it looks really flat. Now. TEACH MEH

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For the second one, I really dont know what to say. Its soooooooo good! I dont know how to criticize it, so think of it as a 10000000000000/10

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