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hold on

Barkleaf, but Barkpaw at the moment

waiittt- boom Whisperclaw

oof we should do the personallities

Barkpaw/Barkleaf- She is funny and a scatter-brain. She lost her leg due to a dog when she was a kittypet. She likes to have fun, but nobody likes her. Whisperclaw- He is rude to only Barkpaw/Barkleaf, and show's no respect to her, and sometimes to make her learn, he will bite her other leg and trip her. He has a secret friend from Thunderclan named Lionfur, and they talk about how pathetic Barkpaw is.

yep!

Barkpaw was in a dark, gloomy place. She looked down and saw her leg. She looked concerned, and moved it up and down, when a dark, silouhete of a dog bite her leg clean off. White blood dripped, as she fell. She called for help, but no one came. She suddenly was in Riverclan territory. She looked around and walked to her nest. She sighed, when everything turned to black. She saw eyes staring at her, her kittypet collar on. They jumped out at her, and she was gone. She opened her eyes in shock. She looked around. She looked at her neck, with a sigh of relief there was no blue collar on it that said Nut on it. She laid her head down on her paws, looking into the light of the camp.

Barkpaw was shivering from the nightmare, but still looked at the camp. She nuzzled Stumpypaw's cheek, Barkpaw's tail starting to sway slowly. Barkpaw tried to smile, but all that came out was a faint straight face. She put her head down on her paws again. Her ears perked up, as she heard, "BARKPAW YOU LAZY APPRENTICE GET UP!" The crackly voice of Whisperclaw was disgusting. Barkpaw's ears lowered. "GET UP!" Whisperclaw bit Barkpaw's nub of a leg. Barkpaw whimpered and then got up. "Bye... Stumpypaw." She turned to Stumpypaw and walked off with Whisperclaw behind her, nagging her leg for her to hurry up.

Whisperclaw whipped around and batted at Stumpypaw's eye. "Don't disrespect a warrior!" He spat at her. "As for Barkpaw, Webstar is a fool for letting a KITTYPET a warrior! She could never be a true warrior. She is disloyal!" He snarled. He batted at Stumpypaw's eye again and went back to Barkpaw, snapping at her leg.

Whisperclaw had stopped. Barkpaw looked back at Stumpypaw. "You should run..." Her tail signaled Stumpypaw. "Well, guess what, Stumpykit? Your father is dead because you had to stray into Thunderclan territory and steal prey." He growled. Barkpaw's ears pinned back. She nodded her head, whispering, "Go." Redflame walked up to them. "Whisperclaw, get to your den, now." Redflame ordered. "But, I have Barkpaw-" He began. "NOW." Redflame's voice raised. Whisperclaw sighed and retreated to his den. "Barkpaw, Stumpypaw, come with me. NOW."

Redflame led them to the flowing river. "Stumpypaw, you shouldn't have lashed out at Whisperclaw, who is a warrior." He looked at his reflection in the river. "As for you, Barkpaw, I am so sorry you have him as your mentor. I will talk to Webstar about you getting a new mentor." He paused. "You two are such brave apprentices. Stumpypaw, your father would be proud of you." He gently gazed at Stumpypaw. Barkpaw looked at them, with a warm smile of comfort. A sudden jolt of pain from her leg challenged her brain. She no longer smiled. She looked down while standing on the cool grass, making a "shhhsss" sound. Redflame and Stumpypaw looked at Barkpaw. Barkpaw hissed in pain, and ran off, whimpering. "Barkpaw! Come back!" Stumpypaw yelled. "No, let her go." Redflame insisted.

Redflame replied, "Stumpypaw, we both know she is a nice cat, but maybe a kittypet life is better for Barkpaw." Stumpypaw's ears shot up, "What are you implying?" She hissed. "That she can't be a warrior because she has kittypet blood?!" She hissed again. "Stumpypaw.." Redflame gazed. "I'm saying maybe this life is too hard for her. Her loosing her leg doesn't help either." He said calmly. Stumpypaw's tail lashed. "Being a kittypet doesn't mean she can't become a warrior!" Stumpypaw snarled. "Stumpypaw we talked about yelling to warriors." Redflame reminded her.

Redflame looked at the Thunderclan territory on the other side of the lake. "Oh, Rosestar... help your kit.." Redflame said to himself. Barkpaw was in her nest, laying down, her nub leg extended, decreasing the amount of pain. Her eyes were puffy from crying. A few kits stumbled into her stomach. "What in Starclan's name-" Barkpaw looked up to the kits. "Oh. HI!" Three kits mewed. Barkpaw's tail swayed slowly. The kits looked at her tail and started pouncing. Kitten giggles were heard.

"You kits run along." Barkpaw said, flicking her tail. "Bye bye!" They squealed, and scampered off. She smiled, and then saw Stumpypaw. She got up and limped to Stumpypaw. She lowered her back, and slowly made her way to Stumpypaw. She jumped and knocked over her. "Pinned ya!" Barkpaw laughed.

(apprenices) Barkpaw gazed with a smile, and kicked Stumpypaw off with her leg, and rolled till Barkpaw had her pinned again. Barkpaw's claws were sheathed on Stumpypaw's paws. They gazed for a quick moment.

Barkpaw tried to remain happy, "Oh.. bye.." She couldn't help but let her ears droop. She limped back to her nest. She fwumped down on her nest, her tail staying still. She put her head on her paws. She then dozed off into black.

She had no dream, and by the time she got back up, angry Whisperclaw was nagging her. "Get up! You need to learn to fight, like that twig Stumpypaw. You need to be strong to become a warrior!" He growled at her, snapping at her leg. She got up and stretched. They padded all the way to the field, just beside the camp. "Come and get me!" He snarled. Barkpaw lowered her back to blend in with the grass, as she launched herself from the long, thin grass with her claws extended, she pounced onto Whisperclaw's side. He shook her off easily. "Grip on!" He snarled at her. Her haunches going up and down in the grass, she lunged onto his side again, and gripped her claws through his flesh. He flailed around, trying to kick her off. He turned and flipped her down, her forhead hard on the dirt, with her body up in the air. She flopped down, drips of blood trickling down her head. "Is that all you got, kittypet?" He taunted her.