Hello.

"Shadow-whisper" a voice came behind shadow-whisper. Shadow-whisper swung around and saw nightpelt behind her holding a spider "ek!" Shadow-whisper screamed and fell backwards "sorry!" Nightpelt held back a laugh. "why do you have that?!" Shadow-whisper asked her "our clan has a lot of them I decided I wanted to hunt one." She mewed. "Whatever. I am going to sleep" shadow-whisper curled up and slept. End of first part

Is this a warrior cat? By the way that looks good! I am looking to make storys and I love warrior cats.