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05.07.2019
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05.07.2019 23:00
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i woke up with a shutter, a cool feeling pouring down my back. i looked around my bedroom sweeting,but i diding know why. my room had a big bed, in the middle, pushed back on the wall. with a thick big merrier on the end of my bed. i diding understand, but it felt...wrong, in the room, i felt like i was in a grave yard, an odd, scary feeling. "stop, its probably nothing, you gotta to grow up." i said to myself. i looked in the merrier, me, with orange fur, and yellow hair, and a yellow tummy. i got up to get some water, i guess thats what i told myself, it was just an excuse to get out of that room. i felt like something was...watching me. i walked down the stairs, looking at the window that was right in the kitchen. i felt...weird.... someone called my name, from out side, i thought this was weird as i look at my watch to see it was 1:02, i herd it agen, "jackson!" this time it was screaming, it was coming from outside. i ran to my parents bedroom to remember that they were on VK. it broke in. screaming,
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he's gone, the doctor said to the poor mother, in tears. he's been in a coma, after falling down the stairs on his way to the kitchen. beep beep beeeeeeep, the sound of the heart rate machine, after the sound of a voice beep in the boys mind, "you will always be broken.
05.07.2019 23:02
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That's good
05.07.2019 23:02
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thanks!
05.07.2019 23:04
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when it says beep in the boys mind, i meant deep in the boys mind
05.07.2019 23:06
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wooooooooooooowwwwww!!!!!!!!
05.07.2019 23:21
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Cool!
05.07.2019 23:33
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i dont get it
05.07.2019 23:46
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read it agen
05.07.2019 23:34
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If you make a book i'd want to be your editor, this is goood
05.07.2019 23:35
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but it still needs some edits.
05.07.2019 23:46
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ya!
05.07.2019 23:35
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good job! but, when someone "broke in sceaming." what did that mean?
05.07.2019 23:47
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he broke into the house
05.07.2019 23:44
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I woke up with a shutter, a cool feeling pouring down my back. I looked around my bedroom sweating, but I didn't know why. My room had a big bed in the middle, pushed back against the wall with a thick big mirror on the end of my bed. I didn't understand, but it felt...wrong in the room, it felt like I was in a grave yard, an odd, scary feeling. "Stop, its probably nothing, you gotta to grow up," I said to myself. I looked in the mirror. Me, with orange fur, yellow hair, and a yellow tummy. I got up to get some water, I guess that's what I told myself, but it was just an excuse to get out of that room. I felt like something was...watching me. Walking down the stairs, I looked at the window that was right in the kitchen. I felt...weird. Someone called my name from outside, I thought this was odd as I had looked at my watch to see it was 1:02. I heard it again, "Jackson!"
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Couldn't help but edit it..
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05.07.2019 23:48
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This time it was screaming, it was coming from outside. I ran to my parents bedroom only to remember that they were on Vacation. It broke in. "He's gone," the doctor said to the poor mother who was in tears. "He's been in a coma, after falling down the stairs on his way to the kitchen." Beep beep beeeeeeep, the noise of the heart rate machine, after the sound of a voice deep in the boys mind, "you will always be broken."
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