QnA or ‘teach ur ways’
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Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
14.04.2020 01:19
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Taboo-Lagoon[OP]
14.04.2020 01:20
LinkAsk questions for QnA obviously. ‘Teach me your ways’ is a way of offering help. You can ask me how I do something and I’ll try best I can to explain.
1. how was your day!
2.how old are you
3. what is your gender
if these are to privet i understand if you dont respond
Okay, well each person has their own style of poetry. Some are elaborate and wordy, others are simple and tend to be shorter. My style prefers simple things, and I take them and make them into something meaningful. To start out, I use a single word or idea. One of my favorites is Autumn Air, which I used the idea of holding your breath.
I breathe in, the oxygen filling my lungs,
Nourishing my body with its sweet scent
Cramming its way into every vessel
I wait, looking up at the sky
I allow the oxygen to flitter through my body
Now carbon dioxide, it floats through me,
Begging to be let out
But I wait, savoring the bits and pieces
The smell of dying leaves and browned grass
I listen to the pitter-patter of red squirrels,
Playing in the grass, preparing for winter
I feel the coarse plants under my hands,
Small thorns waiting to grow
My lungs are pleading, begging me
Let go, they beg
And I do
Welcome back, autumn air
With that idea of holding your breath, I put in sensory details like the smell of the air I'm holding, the searing pain of my lungs without oxygen, and the sight of little squirrels playing. Even though the poem seems to be about holding my breath, it's more focused on the deeper meaning of a person not wanting to let go of the past.
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Tho i can feel your passion, how it just, flows in you
It's like your way of speaking, your own way of expressing yourself
A mixture of emotions and words, all together
It's also your escape, when feeling bored, mad or sad, you just use that to express yourself
And i really admire how passionate you are
Uh- sorry if i sound weird hehe..😅😓
People look down at you? They only do that because they don't know your other sides (just like you said) they only see the "weak" side, which is actually stronger then average
But that's just how life works, i guess. We see the picture blindly. Not many people look at the important details. Even tho these details are what forms the real picture. Those details are your personality. So small yet important. Only those who get really close to you see more then just the picture. People are always wearing masks. Btw, i sometimes wonder, the true identity and personality of people come from the heart, the brain or both? Or maybe the soul?
Hhhh ,sorry, i like to observe and analyse things i guess
I like that about you; very observant. That's a good thing if you want to write poems, or really anything. You can get up close and personal with things. You have a way with words that I can see. And yes, I know many people - including myself - who wear masks to hide themselves. But I feel like I can mostly be myself here. I like that about this site, it allows me to be open and find myself when other places wouldn't.