rate my art? plz?
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Annamations 
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448
12.08.2019
9 comments
jaidenanimationsfan
12.08.2019 15:40
Link6/10 i could give critique but a certain fangirl said i'm under arrest for not asking permission before.
Annamations[OP]
12.08.2019 15:43
LinkHonestly I’ve heard it before ;-;
The shoulders are too broad, the head is too big, the hands are too small. I’ve heard it all-
jaidenanimationsfan
12.08.2019 15:45
Linkmore like- the head's just a close up of squidward's nos e that's the shape.
jaidenanimationsfan
12.08.2019 15:47
Linkthe eyes are too long and too big, you do well with details i can admit but you have to work on anatomy more. I got critique and changed my art completely and it still sucks now but you get the point.
Right, I'm gonna be brutally honest here.
The head isn't too big, it's just the wrong shape and doesn't get placed on the neck properly. The shoulders are actually too small, and they're very stiff. Shoulders are fluid and a key part for the arms mobility. The arms themselves are fine, they're just too long. Hands reach about mid thigh, the elbows around the belly button. Triceps and biceps are same size in length.
The torsos are also stiff. Bodies main point of movement is the middle. They should be more curved and have different poses.
the hands are fine im not gonna judge you, hands are hard
i asked y’all to rate it not completely demolish my self esteem k thx
I can't say much since mine is painfully worse
There is just 2 things that severely trigger me
Those arms are SLIM. LIKE TWIGS.
And the front view, (I say this looking at the pfp for OTF) THE NOSES MAKE THEM LOOK LIKE PONIES