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13.01.2018 00:44
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The breeze in the wind, and the damp smell of swamps filled Sparrowfangs nostrils as he grabbed his rabbit he killed and ran, he dropped it halfway hoping the dogs would stop, they didn’t, He grabbed a tree and flipped on to the log, clinging on with all his might as he was done hunting as the clan leader, there were 3 savage house dogs trying to attack his Clouder and him, he and his Clouder jumped off when it was cracking over the weight of the Clouder. The kits were dragging behind but they were getting picked up by cats and brought to the front, they had to get to the camp for a better ground to battle or just shelter. He saw a greenish spotted furred kit falling behind, it was LeafBreeze with her new name from the second moon of her life. LeafBreeze striped, SparrowFang paused and tried to decide to go back or not, he didn’t have much time before the dogs would kill her in front of him, teeth and everything, so he chose, he chose to run back to save the kit, he grabbed her by the scruff and softly as
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“It is against the rules to kill savagely, if the dog survives, he moves on, if we knew he was going to die, we would kill him very fast with high pain but fast death, it doesn’t look that bad Star-kit, I think he will survive.” and as she said it, the dog got up and limped after his surrendered friends with a straight sad face. Star-kit watched this all, and she was the most curious kit in the clouder, and so the kit pretended to limp over to the nursery like the dog limping over to his surrendered friends. Smallmouth, one of the elders in the clouder talked “I wish I were that young! Don’t ya think Halfear?” The elder just kept on looking forward, then Smallmouth meowed loudly but small “IS YOUR HEARING AS BAD AS YOUR BROKEN PAW HALFEAR?” Halfear looked over “Yes Smallmouth?” Smallmouth rolled her eyes annoyingly and she stomped her paw “Don’t you wish that you were as small and energetic as Star-kit? She has such an imagination.” Smallmoth rasped with her own voice She
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LOL this is parts of my book :P
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13.01.2018 00:53
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nope!
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GRRRRR PEOPLE think that... this is my book, see?
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Mako was watching the sky and then she saw a twinkle as she tilted her head like a dog begging for treats, except she is a wolf. “Hey look! A shooting star!” She grinned happily as the pack sat and watched it zoom through the sky, Her fur bristled and she got up, then she walked out the overhang and she smelled the sweet scents of new prey coming after the no-leaf time. She stared back, thinking of leaving forever, she did. Then she went out of the overhang and over a rocky slope up ahead. Then she bounced to the left and through the hollow, she looked around and saw a small brown rabbit 5 snout-lengths away, then she thought this might be enough for two days atleast. She crouched down and quietly crawled over to a bush one snout-length away, then she alarmed it and she pounced, it sprang the the left, aware and covered with fear scent, she jumped on it, pinned it down and sank her teeth into the rabbit’s neck, killing it fast.
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“I got it!” suddenly there was a deep growl on the right of her, and she curved to that direction with the rabbit in her fangs. Then it growled menacingly “This is Shadow clouder territory!” Just then, Rushlight popped out and she curled her tail between her legs, “W-who are you?..” he grinned fearlessly and meowed, almost sounding harmless. “I am Rushlight, leader of Dark clouder, you must have heard that I took my usedtobe leader, who was weak and purposeless, and killed him in a battle for the right to be leader?” she hesitated, then she barked fearless of what could happen “I have never… why did you do it?” she tilted her head. He snorted “Because, he was a bad and good leader, and we are good, sometimes,”
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VShe growled deeply in her throat. “I am not a coward, fight me.” she cleared her eyes on two small cats and a huge bulky cat with two other medium sized cats by his side. “I-I mean I am sorry to cross through your territory, I promise never to come back, if I may, may I go to the Running fields?” The huge bulky cat shifted to his haunches and mewed calmly. “I get it, but you should never cross, especially when your a wolf, and not from any other clouders.” the small cat speaked briefly “Yes, you really should not.” the small cat proudly bowed over the huge, bulky cat.
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oh goodness me, sorry i am so rude..
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