MOVIE-STAR
Tycoon Has Awoken...
FA dead hours be like:
Giorno <3 You~!
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💖Saber "Fate Stay Night"
Bird
Let me rate u
by:
Vaporeonlover 
354
354
18.11.2018
38 comments
Vaporeonlover[OP]
18.11.2018 18:11
LinkAttach some stuff for me to rate
Vaporeonlover[OP]
18.11.2018 18:12
LinkInspired by glatternition
Vaporeonlover[OP]
18.11.2018 18:13
LinkI will also provide a bit of critique
Ash-Fur
07.12.2018 02:38
Linkheres 2 i guess.... it wont matter anyways though...
this first to tell you somthing> read desc of this anim
Ash-Fur
07.12.2018 02:39
Linkand dis
Yellow. The lineart and shading are messy, and the anatomy is... Not correct
Here ya are, not my best work but whatever
I trust your opinion and would like some constructive criticism
Thank you for the rating, I scored better then i thought i was gonna
Would you maybe have any advice on how to improve?
Try to center the head on the neck and work on your anatomy. The arms don't look the same length. That's about it
Teal. The animation looks a TEENSY bit weird but otherwise it looks smooth and the lineart is good. A little hard to see though
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Orange. The lines are too thick for drawing that small. It's a bit messy all around and Destiny's arm is just... Not correct
Teal. The lineart is messy and that head is waaaaaaaay too big for the body.
