@dAncInG-bAgeLs
30.06.2018
49 comments
dAncInG-bAgeLs
30.06.2018 04:45
Linkowo
I'm here.
Kookoocupofpotatos[OP]
30.06.2018 04:46
Linkowo Ima use my main bbys: Jonothon-kun (Taken) KooKoo-chan (Single) Yui-San (Single) and Ash-kun (Single)
dAncInG-bAgeLs
30.06.2018 04:51
LinkIn that case, I'll use the ones I rarely use. I'm trying to establish their personalities.
Josho, Jaxen, and Lizzy
They're all single
Kookoocupofpotatos[OP]
30.06.2018 04:53
Link:O noice maybe I can finally find a suited mate for my eternally lonely bean, KooKoo.
dAncInG-bAgeLs
30.06.2018 04:55
Linkooo maybe
Kookoocupofpotatos[OP]
30.06.2018 04:57
LinkAnd maybe Glasses mcdorkface (Jonothon) With stop being an A-hole OoOoOoOoOoOo sO mAnY pOsSiBiLiTiEs (Probably not, he's a major butt.)
Kookoocupofpotatos[OP]
30.06.2018 04:58
Link:P
Kookoocupofpotatos[OP]
30.06.2018 04:58
LinkIma start now,
dAncInG-bAgeLs
30.06.2018 04:59
LinkOkay
KooKoo: *Walking in the street,*
Yui: *Texting*
Jonothon: *Reading "Literature"*
Josho: *sitting in a cafe across the street*
Wth.. when are they gonna serve my coffee??..
Lizzy: Be patient you dork.
Jaxsen: w-what she said..
KooKoo: *Lays head on Jonothons shoulder* Why is all you do read?
Jonothon: *Pushes her off.* Nya...
All of them: *Get into cafe*
Ash: Shivers* I-I hate it here...
Josho: *watches them enter* LEAVE WHILE YOU CAN, THERE'S TERRIBLE SERVICE!
Lizzy: *lunges and holds Josho's mouth shut* OMFG..
D-don't mind him..! He's only impatient! *awkward smile*
Jaxsen: 0-0" *covers fave with hood* make him stop..! We're attracting attention!..
Ash: Help! The hooded man is attracting attention to me! *Cover face with hood*
Yui: Can you just, not? *Glares at Josho*
Jonothon: *Ignored all of this and continues to read*
KooKoo: EVERYONE SHUT IT!
Josho: *cough* Simple answer from a simple person, no.
Lizzy: Joshoooo.. stfu.. *headlock him* I'm terribly sorry, just ignore us.. *another awkward smile*
Jaxsen: mmph- *covers face* I d-don't know these people..! I swear..!
Ash: Y-Yes you do! You C-Creep!
KooKoo: *Sigh and laugh sarcastically*
Jonothon: *The only one looking normal.* Tea, please, *In nearly just 3 minutes he gets his tea*
Yui: Ugh... Be gone, thots... *Still texting*
(Well uh, your OCs.. Sure are compelling, aren't they? The "shy" one is attracting attention, the stereotypical "nerd" is unoriginal, and the rest are practically just a reskin of the same bully?? This'll be VERY entertaining.. >_>)
Josho: *face is steaming red, about to explode, spitting profanities only to be censored by Lizzy's hand*
Lizzy: *visibly struggling* c-calm down..! Nothing to see here!..
Jaxsen: hnnnnggg.. I feel like I'm gonna throw up.. *runs into the bathroom, holding stomach)
(That hurts, and um, no, actually, no, >:c Jonothon Isn't the nerd, in real time he acts that way to cover his real self, because he is a Billionare/play boy, and umm, Yui is actually a mad murder and just trys to fit in, and KooKoo is a smart lad. The shy one, is yep prettty much.
And um dude, that's literally the worst thing you could say to me, I literally want to curse you out so bad,)
(You would've known that about Jonothon Yui And KooKoo if you had read my former rps, huh >:CCCCCC)
Yui: DUCK AND COVER *Hides under table, while everyone else runs out from disgust*
KooKoo: Oh, I'll help! *Duct tapes mouth shut.* That'll hold... *Duct tape arms behind back* That'll also hold. *Winks*
(Idek why, B cuz I k u were being sarcastic, but I suddenly feel bad about using Jonothon TuT)
(First off, I'm not a stalker and won't watch other ppl's rps, and second, you're too vague with what you say. Address the character with the action you're DOING to them. I can't understand this too well, you may just have misread my half-)
Jaxsen: m-mph!? *rips the duct tape with teeth and slides into the bathroom*
(Hmph, >:C I must've got into the baloney again. Also, I'm tired, living off of cofee for the past 2 days, and am 12,)
Yui: *Slowly gets up from the bottom of the table, With dirt all on her skirt,* What just happened..?
(Baloney? I prefer smoked ham. It's alright, we all have our off days.)
Lizzy: s-shut up..! *slaps Josho in the face*
Josho: ERGHMPHFRHN- *more muffled profanities*
Yui: *Walks over there with glass in her foot* I JUST GOT FRGIN GLASS IN MY FOOT! SO SHUT UP! *Takes another step, and urges herself not to cry.* AND I HAVE A BROKEN HEEL! *Takes off High heel* I AM NOT HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!
Lizzy: *ignores Yui and throws Josho out of the door* phew..
Jaxsen: *walks out of the bathroom, wiping mouth* let's get out of here.. *steps outside*
Yui: *Literally on the floor crying after taking one step towards the two*
KooKoo: All clean! *She comes out with a mop covered in barf and in a janitors outfit,*
Yui: I have a couple qeustions *Sniffle* Where did you get that outfit?!?!
KooKoo: Your closet of course! Darlin' *Winks and smiles*
Yui: Why you little- *Comes running at her, but once again collapses, crying from the pain of broken glass in her foot.*
(Uh, okay..)
Lizzy: you peice of sht.. we can't even go in public with you.. *shoves Josho*
Josho: fck off,, at least I don't try and make myself look good after everything is already ruined..
Jaxsen: can you guys just stop fighting?? For once..!?
Yui: *Still hysterically crying, Even though her feet are bloody.*
KooKoo: Let's all just be friends! *Tries to imitate sailor moon, fails.*
Lizzy: you're not in this..
Josho: *rambles non-sensically*
Jaxsen: *walks away slowly*
Jonothon: *Finishes his drink pays, and walks out, like NOTHING EVER FRIGGING HAPPENED!* *ignoring his sisters excruciating pain, and bloody feet.*
Ash: I wish I was a girl... *Stares at floor* *His voice cracks and squeak, it sounds hilarious, because he has a girly voice.
(Well uh.. I'm going to stop here. There's not much of a plot anyway.)
(I don't really like the way you rp, either. If you didn't notice, I'm extremely honest.)
(You can get offended if you want to, but try to take it as advice and improve on your skills. Anyways, have a good night.)
I understand, and no I don't take it as an offense, I'm 12, dude, I have slacker grades in every subject, and I am anti-social, plus, You like to make things more realistic I geuss, I like to make them detailed... We are different, but plese dont stop us from being friends, Also, I'm not gonna focus on bringing up my rp skills, cause I almost had summer school...
It's more of grammatical errors and that I can't understand most of it.
Guess what? I'm your age. I HAVE summer school and I'm a C-class student. But you know what, that has JACK-SHT to do at all to do with RPing.
I'm not even relatively "realistic" either. Jaxsen is an anthropomorphic bat.
I don't mean to sound steamed, but I'm just giving you friendly critique.
*Cough cough* I was a d first of all, I FAILED my latin class, and dude, can you please stop? I'm trying to resolve this...
I'm literally upset right now, great job for making me feel like shit. LET'S SEE HOW FAR WE CAN PUSH EVELYN BEFORE SHE LOSES HER SHIT! LET'S SEE HOW FAR UNTIL SHE GO'S APE! WELL ****. YOU! I DID IT! I'M CRAZY NOW! AND HOW ABOUT I DOWNLOAD ****ING VIRUSES ON MY COM JUST SO YOU CAN HAVE YOUR ****ING GRAMMATICAL ERRORS OF MINE CHECKED! LET'S DO IT! ASSHOLE!
Latin.. Hmm.. Exploratory class for me.. I failed English, history, and math.
I never started anything. There's nothing to "resolve" here, either. I'm literally giving you tips, and you take it as an attack against you.
AND I QUOTE! "Guess what? I'm your age. I HAVE summer school and I'm a C-class student. But you know what, that has JACK-SHT to do at all to do with RPing."
Yes. In fact, curse words are used to emphasize and give a more VIVID description. Ae; more emotion.
(I am sorry for your troubles, my parents left on a camping trip for a couple weeks today, My dog died, I found out I have a high risk of breast cancer, and depression, God bless,)
-Evelyn
Send my regards. Hope you feel better. I'm an atheist so, cuthulu bless, I guess??