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04.06.2018
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04.06.2018 23:40
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nice
04.06.2018 23:41
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Going to add more details on each frame It's not the final
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04.06.2018 23:43
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Something looks extremely off and I don't know what it is
04.06.2018 23:43
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Amazing
04.06.2018 23:44
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N O I T ' S H A P P E N I N G A G A I N
05.06.2018 01:12
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Its amazing that nothing is off about this
04.06.2018 23:45
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This is really good! The transitions are amazingly smooth! Can't wait to the final product!!! <3
04.06.2018 23:59
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Really? :O I thought there was something off about it The fight should be ready by next week :D
05.06.2018 02:32
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YESSSS
04.06.2018 23:46
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i think it should be a little bit slower and have more inbetweens
04.06.2018 23:46
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other than that, its amazing!
04.06.2018 23:50
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I might beg flipanim to stop speeding up every single animation all the time. I will do put more frames in it :D, thank you!
04.06.2018 23:46
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The one frame stays for a split second too long and that standy part in the hair kinda teleports. Otherwise, real neat!
04.06.2018 23:48
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also 666 likes congrats
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04.06.2018 23:46
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9/10 I'm not the best but there is always room to improve
04.06.2018 23:56
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I'm really trying to improve on my art right now With my lines and proportions mainly
04.06.2018 23:58
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I'm always trying to improve my fight animations. My goal is either to get to Monty Oum's fight animation style or studio triggers.... BUT THAT'S WHEN I'M LIKE 10 YEARS IN ANIMATION.
04.06.2018 23:58
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(i worded smth wrong in my previous comment sry) maybe try putting each frame a little slower than you want it to see if that will help with keeping the speed how you like it. when it kind of zooms in, or the camera angle spins around her, it seems like there should just be one more frame. other than that it's rly good!! can't wait for the final product!!
05.06.2018 00:06
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I think you just solved by problem :OOOOOOOOO That was bugging me so much, the turnaround seemed a little bit off for me. Whenever I put it at 0.7........ IT'S REALLY SLOW( I guess it's because I have a lot of frames in that one scene lol) The fight should be coming next week :D
04.06.2018 23:58
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Don’t have much to critic so
05.06.2018 00:07
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That's fine :) I ask so that THIS ONE SCENE CAN BE PERFECT
05.06.2018 00:23
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Absolutely amazing! But there’s that one frame where she freezes in that (kind of) awkward position, instead of making the frame longer stretch her a bit, so she looks more dynamic and even smoother But seriously, awesome job dude
05.06.2018 00:28
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What do you mean by stretch? I totally agree with you on the position XD
05.06.2018 00:48
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Like, have her arms swing back a bit more, maybe have her whole body stretch back a bit? Also definitely put in some smear frames (if you know how to do them cuz I don’t XD)
05.06.2018 00:31
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9.9999999999999 / 10 GREAT! though speed it up a tinyyyyyyyyy bit and i think you will get a 10! :D
05.06.2018 00:43
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Ooof i don't know cause a lot of peeps have told me to slow it down. And they are still telling me to slow it down. I haven't seen u in a while though! You were the first one to comment on my animations the first time I've been here :D
05.06.2018 19:07
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oh my gosh this is actually REALLY GOOODDD!!!!! im hoping to see more of your animations 0w0
05.06.2018 19:41
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Thank you! I'm still working on some stuff I needed to fix :P
06.06.2018 06:38
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I can tell you were very precise with each frame. Very smooth.
06.06.2018 14:14
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Thank you! I put a lot of time into that ONE SCENE. It didn't take me too long though :D Now I just have to do that with the rest of the animation......
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