its good but the hand shouldnt be that way you would nt bang on a door or on a screen like that it looks like ur knocking

Meh. Make her or him pull his/her pull their hand back more. Add a little salsa to it if u know what i mean

Its nice its just dat it needs more BOOM!

I dont want to be meen im just giving u tips,otay? You could check out my version of this and learn from it and learn by what i mean to add some salsa