Asher: STORY TIME! (R.P, Too!)
by:
AwesomePossumYT 
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04.11.2017
13 comments
JordonCaine
04.11.2017 13:23
Link(shrug)
AwesomePossumYT[OP]
09.11.2017 00:59
LinkJust wait for the story
(Part 1: Asher)
I'm running as fast as I can. I HAVE to get to work on time. If I'm not at the studio... I run faster. Almost... there... "I'm... here..." I gasp. My boss, Teo, raises one of his eyebrows. "Heh. You made it just in time, Star of the show." He says. My face gets hot. ACK! I'M BLUSHING! My sister said that if my face gets hot and I'm not mad,I'm blushing. I look down from the handsome face of my boss. Teo lifts up my face. "Is something wrong?" His black eyes lock with mine. "You have the most beautiful dark blue eyes I've ever seen." "Th-Thank you..." "It's time to get ready for the show. Go get ready in your dressing room." I run to the dressing room as instructed. I get on the clothes he got out for me, which was a black knee-high dress with a jacket to go with it. I put it on. It's time for the show. Wish me luck!
Okay so none of this has been established. When telling a story, you have to establish things before you get into the plot. Normally if you start in the middle of a plot it's called in media res but you can't do something like that without giving ANY backstory, it confuses the reader and scares them off because no one wants to expend their brainpwer to figure out what youre saying in regards to your characters no ones attached to yet. unless theyre some weirdo who reads house of leaves for fun. Oh, and, no one would describe someone else's eyes as dark blue. theyd just say blue.
Nope. He meant dark blue eyes. Teo is the type of person who will describe anything if he feels like it. Which is what happens when he looks at someone or something. Just let the story unfold. No one knows anything about Teo unless I describe him completly. He's a crazy psychopath who kidnapped a girl named Lillyanna in a draft. Besides, I'm the author, aren't I? I'll add a back story sooner or later.
But the Teo in this story is way different. I like to see my characters from a different perspective, y'know?
I just love it when people purposefully disregard something I said like writing is entirely subjective
Look, you CAN write stories with no backstory. But making it good? That's another story. You have to be a really good writer to pull that off and not have it be super confusing or gimmicky. And honestly, hearing a story about someone kidnapping a girl is much more interesting than what's happening right now. Reading about someone being late to something is a romance novel into.
Why don’t I just make a new story about someone who’s alter ego is protected the good ego from herself?
And the thing about me is that I’m kind of into that kind of thing. I’m supposed to be making it so that there is more than one story to choose. You choose your story. I can’t do this at school because it wouldn’t be “appropriate “ or at home because it’s weird. Idga? on how weird it is because people online are sometimes into stuff like that. Like Septiplier stories for example. People don’t do it as often, but still.
THE STORY IS OVER. IM VERY BUSY TRYING TI SUCCEED IN MAKING IT SO EVERYONE ENJOYS(sorry caps.
Atoni
(Baby Atoni): *yawns*
Ace(4 year old sister of Atoni): Hmph.
Atoni: *reaches for Ace’s hand*
**Ace hesitates and then lets Atoni grab her hand**
Atoni: *puts hand up to mouth and bites it*
**Ace screams bloody murder**
Geni(Mother): My dear fangs! What just happened?
Adam(Ace’s twin brother): Atoni bit Ace.
