I'll judge your art out of 10
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fionadumbgg1alt3
03.12.2020 17:07
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TotallYEET[OP]
03.12.2020 17:10
LinkPlease leave a drawing or anim to check.
fionadumbgg1alt3
03.12.2020 17:26
LinkTotallYEET[OP]
03.12.2020 17:46
Link7/10
I can see where you were going with this.
For shading, I would have the character on a separate layer where it can not touch the background because it looks cleaner that way. The other thing is, you used a method of getting base shapes in different colors which is something I do. However the mistake I see is not having a brighter color and a darker color block for each part. That makes shading look smoother and easier to do.
Lastly, lower the opacity for all parts of the drawing. I know it takes more strokes and is more time consuming, but it reaps great results!
fionadumbgg1alt3
03.12.2020 18:05
Linktysm for the advice!!
First one:
9.5/10
Ok, so I love it when things are smoothly shaded, and lines are a darker version of the original. The composition is great, and anatomy looks great!
Only thing I could say is maybe make the glass on the helmet look more gassy? I would add more dramatic and bold white lines for that, but that's my amateur ass.
Second one:
7/10
You seem to excel with human characters over animalistic ones. The paw up front seems kinda whack IMHO, as well as some of the shading on the chest and paw.
It isn't a bad piece overall, but a few elements could be better.
My advice would be to try and make joints in the paws a bit more visible so it looks more structured.
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6/10
I think you are good at facial expressions, something I suck at entirely. However, the lineart could be smoother, and lots of the shading is kinda odd.
I would suggest shading in block like forms or using a less dark color for the roller brush in order to get smoother shading. As for lineart, practice is usually the key.
6.5/10
The facial expression is just adorable, and the shading is good in most places.
However, it looks like the quality declines the lower you go. The top looks great, but then some of the lines have weird dips and stuff. Also, they seem kinda thin IMO, but that may just be my preference for mildly thicker lines.
So I'd say take your time, and thicker lines for larger pieces.
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7/10
Edgy, but in a good way. The composition is great, but if there was one huge evil rabbit being in the middle, but cloaked in shadows, that would have been the dopest shit ever.
The background is amazing and the shading is pretty good.
Only things are anatomy and lineart. Take some time to study what rabbits look like IRL. The muzzles are less defined. As for lineart, like I've said before, take your time.